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  • Thank you! Can I get feedback on these three images please?

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    • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
      Thank you! Can I get feedback on these three images please?

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      1. dirty, centering, borderline soft
      2. color, centering, borderline soft
      3. centering, borderline soft

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      • Thank you, do these versions address those issues?

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        • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
          Thank you, do these versions address those issues?

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          Sharpness on the latter two seems to be improved, but all other issues remain.

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          • Thank you, is there an existing ‘guide’ on centering these type of shots? Should I be considering the entire airframe, or working just with respect to the fuselage?

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            • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
              Thank you, is there an existing ‘guide’ on centering these type of shots? Should I be considering the entire airframe, or working just with respect to the fuselage?
              Fuselage.

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              • Thanks for the guidance Dana: rather than push you for more and more detail I prefer to use your comments as 'signposts' and go back and examine my work more closely.

                Can I please get feedback on these images?

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                • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                  Thanks for the guidance Dana: rather than push you for more and more detail I prefer to use your comments as 'signposts' and go back and examine my work more closely.

                  Can I please get feedback on these images?

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                  Last two a bit low in the frame, but otherwise ok for me.

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                  • Thank you!

                    One more: does this Falcon have JP potential?

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                    • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                      Thank you!

                      One more: does this Falcon have JP potential?

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                      Yes.

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                      • Thank you.

                        Do you think the image below would meet JP standards?

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                        • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                          Thank you.

                          Do you think the image below would meet JP standards?

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                          Hello,

                          i'm not screener but i can help you

                          it's dirty, contrast borderline.

                          Have you had any releases for jpeg artifact it looks to me like you have

                          Regards

                          Olivier

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                          • I've given it a bit of a clean-up:

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                            • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                              I've given it a bit of a clean-up:

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                              A spot remains at the bottom right practically vertically to the left reactor. Do you take your photos in RAW or JPEG?

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                              • RAW with PP in Lightroom. When you say ‘reactor’ do you mean ‘engine’?

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