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  • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
    Thank you,

    Can I get feedback on this freighter?

    It was flying pretty much directly at the sun - not an angle I'd usually try for.
    Borderline for the angle/contrast.

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    • Thank you,

      Can I get feedback on this A330?

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      • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
        Thank you,

        Can I get feedback on this A330?
        Borderline soft.

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        • Thank you.

          Can I get feedback on this A340?

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          • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
            Thank you.

            Can I get feedback on this A340?
            Dirty, borderline harsh contrast.

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            • Thank you,

              Can I get feedback on this 737-800 please?

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              • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                Thank you,

                Can I get feedback on this 737-800 please?
                Terrible crop.

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                • Thank you.

                  Can I get an opinion on this B787?

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                  • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                    Can I get an opinion on this B787?
                    Very awkward crop.

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                    • Would this framing work?

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                      • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                        Would this framing work?
                        No.

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                        • How about this from the same sequence?

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                          • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                            How about this from the same sequence?
                            Better, but still awkward. What exactly are you trying to show with the crop?

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                            • Good question! I like these tight shots because they show details like pitots, vents and the cargo door.

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                              • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                                Good question! I like these tight shots because they show details like pitots, vents and the cargo door.
                                Not really a 'tight' shot though, is it? If you want to show that, why aren't you cropping much closer?

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