Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Steve Worner - prescreening request / editing advice

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
    Thank you! can I get an opinion of another QF A330, below:

    Click image for larger version

Name:	Qantas A330 VH-QPG.jpg
Views:	113
Size:	779.6 KB
ID:	1089118
    Very borderline for contrast. Light is not at a very good angle here.

    Comment


    • Yes, the aircraft was pointing directly toward the sun. I won't put any more effort into that one.

      Can I get an opinion on the SQ B787 below? almost no PP seemed to be required when I opened it in Lightroom.

      Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCI.jpg
Views:	96
Size:	639.3 KB
ID:	1089203

      Comment


      • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
        Yes, the aircraft was pointing directly toward the sun. I won't put any more effort into that one.

        Can I get an opinion on the SQ B787 below? almost no PP seemed to be required when I opened it in Lightroom.

        Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCI.jpg
Views:	96
Size:	639.3 KB
ID:	1089203
        A bit low in the frame, and editing halos visible.

        Comment


        • Thank you - does the version below address these issues?

          Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCI rework.jpg
Views:	84
Size:	636.2 KB
ID:	1089223

          Comment


          • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
            Thank you - does the version below address these issues?

            Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCI rework.jpg
Views:	84
Size:	636.2 KB
ID:	1089223
            Seems to have.

            Comment


            • A few months of inactivity, but I'm back into it a bit. Can I get feedback on this 787?

              Click image for larger version

Name:	Scoot B787 9V-OJI 1600.jpg
Views:	70
Size:	668.9 KB
ID:	1096070

              Comment


              • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                A few months of inactivity, but I'm back into it a bit. Can I get feedback on this 787?

                Click image for larger version

Name:	Scoot B787 9V-OJI 1600.jpg
Views:	70
Size:	668.9 KB
ID:	1096070
                Would be rejected for dark/contrast.

                Comment


                • Taking into account the lighting and cloud conditions, does this version improve things enough?

                  Click image for larger version

Name:	Scoot B787 9V-OJI 1600.jpg
Views:	65
Size:	659.1 KB
ID:	1096128

                  Comment


                  • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                    Taking into account the lighting and cloud conditions, does this version improve things enough?

                    Click image for larger version

Name:	Scoot B787 9V-OJI 1600.jpg
Views:	65
Size:	659.1 KB
ID:	1096128
                    It does not.

                    Comment


                    • Thank you. Does this SQ 787 have JP potential at all?

                      Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ 787 9V-SCO 1600 2.jpg
Views:	72
Size:	645.9 KB
ID:	1097212

                      Comment


                      • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                        Thank you. Does this SQ 787 have JP potential at all?

                        Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ 787 9V-SCO 1600 2.jpg
Views:	72
Size:	645.9 KB
ID:	1097212
                        A touch low in the frame, but otherwise acceptable for me.

                        Comment


                        • Thank you! can I get feedback on these three images please?

                          Click image for larger version

Name:	Malaysian 737 9M-MXW 1600.jpg
Views:	67
Size:	773.3 KB
ID:	1097757
                          Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCO.jpg
Views:	64
Size:	835.4 KB
ID:	1097758
                          Click image for larger version  Name:	Qatar A350 A7-AML 1600.jpg Views:	0 Size:	528.0 KB ID:	1097756

                          Comment


                          • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                            Thank you! can I get feedback on these three images please?

                            Click image for larger version

Name:	Malaysian 737 9M-MXW 1600.jpg
Views:	67
Size:	773.3 KB
ID:	1097757
                            Click image for larger version

Name:	SQ B787 9V-SCO.jpg
Views:	64
Size:	835.4 KB
ID:	1097758
                            Click image for larger version Name:	Qatar A350 A7-AML 1600.jpg Views:	0 Size:	528.0 KB ID:	1097756
                            1. centering
                            2. unattractive angle, but not really a reason for rejection
                            3. borderline dark/contrast

                            Comment


                            • Thank you!

                              Do these images (B737 and A350) address those issues?

                              Click image for larger version

Name:	Malaysian B737 9M-MXW.jpg
Views:	62
Size:	776.2 KB
ID:	1097796Click image for larger version

Name:	Qatar A350 A7-AML 1600 v3.jpg
Views:	59
Size:	526.1 KB
ID:	1097797

                              Comment


                              • Originally posted by steveworner View Post
                                Thank you!

                                Do these images (B737 and A350) address those issues?

                                Click image for larger version

Name:	Malaysian B737 9M-MXW.jpg
Views:	62
Size:	776.2 KB
ID:	1097796Click image for larger version

Name:	Qatar A350 A7-AML 1600 v3.jpg
Views:	59
Size:	526.1 KB
ID:	1097797
                                First better though still a touch low. Would be ok for me in any case. Second still borderline dark/contrast. Not sure it can be improved much.

                                Comment

                                Working...
                                X