Pre-screening request / Editing advice

[ZSNB-XHM]

This is my first time to write an article in English. Please forgive me if I have some grammar mistakes.
I want to know if there is anything wrong with this picture or if there is anything that needs to be fixed.Please point out the problem in the picture, thank you!
I am looking forward to your reply.

[dlowwa]

This is my first time to write an article in English. Please forgive me if I have some grammar mistakes.
I want to know if there is anything wrong with this picture or if there is anything that needs to be fixed.Please point out the problem in the picture, thank you!
I am looking forward to your reply.

Hi,

Quality overall is ok, though maybe a bit soft, and would be better at a lower resolution like 1280pix. Also shows more sky/ground than aircraft, so motive might be an issue as well.

[ZSNB-XHM]

Hi,

Quality overall is ok, though maybe a bit soft, and would be better at a lower resolution like 1280pix. Also shows more sky/ground than aircraft, so motive might be an issue as well.

Thank you! I have just made some modifications to it. Please have a look at it again. Is there anything that needs to be fixed now? Thank you very much!

[dlowwa]

Thank you! I have just made some modifications to it. Please have a look at it again. Is there anything that needs to be fixed now? Thank you very much!

A little bit too much sharpening was added I think Can see some sharpening artifacts (jaggies) on the wing.

[Michael Rodeback]

For someone's first time writing something in English you are very good.

[ZSNB-XHM]

For someone's first time writing something in English you are very good.

Haha, thanks. In China, English is a main subject, so I learn a lot of grammar knowledge in school, although I'm still in middle school.

[ZSNB-XHM]

A little bit too much sharpening was added I think Can see some sharpening artifacts (jaggies) on the wing.

Thank you very much! I'm going to try to make it a little bit softer.