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  • ZSNB-XHM
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    A little bit too much sharpening was added I think Can see some sharpening artifacts (jaggies) on the wing.
    Thank you very much! I'm going to try to make it a little bit softer.

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  • ZSNB-XHM
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    Originally posted by Michael Rodeback View Post
    For someone's first time writing something in English you are very good.
    Haha, thanks. In China, English is a main subject, so I learn a lot of grammar knowledge in school, although I'm still in middle school.

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  • Michael Rodeback
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    For someone's first time writing something in English you are very good.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by ZSNB-XHM View Post

    Thank you! I have just made some modifications to it. Please have a look at it again. Is there anything that needs to be fixed now? Thank you very much! Click image for larger version

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    A little bit too much sharpening was added I think Can see some sharpening artifacts (jaggies) on the wing.

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  • ZSNB-XHM
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    Hi,

    Quality overall is ok, though maybe a bit soft, and would be better at a lower resolution like 1280pix. Also shows more sky/ground than aircraft, so motive might be an issue as well.
    Thank you! I have just made some modifications to it. Please have a look at it again. Is there anything that needs to be fixed now? Thank you very much! Click image for larger version

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by ZSNB-XHM View Post
    This is my first time to write an article in English. Please forgive me if I have some grammar mistakes.
    I want to know if there is anything wrong with this picture or if there is anything that needs to be fixed.Please point out the problem in the picture, thank you!
    I am looking forward to your reply. Click image for larger version

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    Hi,

    Quality overall is ok, though maybe a bit soft, and would be better at a lower resolution like 1280pix. Also shows more sky/ground than aircraft, so motive might be an issue as well.

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  • ZSNB-XHM
    started a topic Pre-screening request / Editing advice

    Pre-screening request / Editing advice

    This is my first time to write an article in English. Please forgive me if I have some grammar mistakes.
    I want to know if there is anything wrong with this picture or if there is anything that needs to be fixed.Please point out the problem in the picture, thank you!
    I am looking forward to your reply. Click image for larger version

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