Announcement

Collapse
No announcement yet.

Pre-screening Request

Collapse
X
 
  • Filter
  • Time
  • Show
Clear All
new posts

  • dlowwa
    replied
    Originally posted by g.forwood View Post
    Thanks Dlowwa! Is the issue with the Fedex that I've brought the shadows up too much? I tried to select just the plane to remove the halo effect but I'm guessing it isn't enough. I have done a re-edit below using just the curves and contrast sliders. Is this more on the right track?

    Thanks again for your patience!

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit-3_1600.jpg
Views:	137
Size:	876.3 KB
ID:	1094059
    Processing looks fine, but you've now run into the actual problem: the light is quite harsh at this angle/time. It will need to be brightened, but doing so will likely lead to either parts of the fuselage being blown out, or the shadows being unnaturally light, with halos accompanying. Softness also apparent, if you decide to try another edit.

    Leave a comment:


  • g.forwood
    replied
    Thanks Dlowwa! Is the issue with the Fedex that I've brought the shadows up too much? I tried to select just the plane to remove the halo effect but I'm guessing it isn't enough. I have done a re-edit below using just the curves and contrast sliders. Is this more on the right track?

    Thanks again for your patience!

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit-3_1600.jpg
Views:	137
Size:	876.3 KB
ID:	1094059

    Leave a comment:


  • dlowwa
    replied
    Originally posted by g.forwood View Post
    Thanks all for your feedback. Julian, you were right, shadows/highlights was the culprit. I've altered my process a bit, how are these re-edits?

    Re: the crop on the first image, there were two opinions offered - is the crop okay or would it need to be altered?
    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0423-Edit-2_1920.jpg
Views:	140
Size:	930.1 KB
ID:	1094047Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit_1920.jpg
Views:	136
Size:	1.27 MB
ID:	1094048
    Thanks again!
    Gareth
    Processing is acceptable on the first, but still far too heavy on the second.

    Leave a comment:


  • g.forwood
    replied
    Thanks all for your feedback. Julian, you were right, shadows/highlights was the culprit. I've altered my process a bit, how are these re-edits?

    Re: the crop on the first image, there were two opinions offered - is the crop okay or would it need to be altered?
    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0423-Edit-2_1920.jpg
Views:	140
Size:	930.1 KB
ID:	1094047Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit_1920.jpg
Views:	136
Size:	1.27 MB
ID:	1094048
    Thanks again!
    Gareth

    Leave a comment:


  • Pilot8998
    replied
    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    Both images are soft and overprocessed (editing halos). Crop is acceptable on the first.
    Hello g.forwood!

    I have the same opinion like dlowwa. But these reasons are fixable. Try to add more sharpness and don't use the shadow/highlight function in your editing software (and if you shot JPEG and have a Nikon - set "D-lightning" to off).
    Of course correct the exposure - you can check this with the histogram in Photoshop or with the screening tool on JetPhotos.

    Regards
    Julian

    Leave a comment:


  • dlowwa
    replied
    Originally posted by g.forwood View Post
    Hi there, after a bit of a hiatus I felt a bit rusty editing and thought it would be worth checking these before uploading. Thanks!

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0423-Edit.jpg
Views:	284
Size:	624.4 KB
ID:	1093732

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit-2.jpg
Views:	311
Size:	884.8 KB
ID:	1093731
    Both images are soft and overprocessed (editing halos). Crop is acceptable on the first.

    Leave a comment:


  • ShipSash
    replied
    Hello. I see that both images are overprocessed and first is cut off.

    Leave a comment:


  • g.forwood
    started a topic Pre-screening Request

    Pre-screening Request

    Hi there, after a bit of a hiatus I felt a bit rusty editing and thought it would be worth checking these before uploading. Thanks!

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0423-Edit.jpg
Views:	284
Size:	624.4 KB
ID:	1093732

    Click image for larger version

Name:	20200704-1B7A0229-Edit-2.jpg
Views:	311
Size:	884.8 KB
ID:	1093731

Working...
X