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  • LewisW295
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    Good evening

    Could I please garner some feedback on this shot? Also, does this class as a night shot as it was shot during sunset?

    Thanks in advance

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  • LewisW295
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    It's not too severe, but the top corners (esp. right) are darker than the rest of the frame.
    Thanks buddy. Will take a look into it

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post

    I don't understand how these could have vignetting when they are cropped in. Is it an inverted vignetting (the light on the rotor) or could I of introduced it accidentally with editing(Pinetools showed a darker tendency towards the upper corners)? Any advice appreciated on that one buddy! I'll scrap any hopes for the Corendon though.
    It's not too severe, but the top corners (esp. right) are darker than the rest of the frame.

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  • LewisW295
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    1. soft, dark, borderline vignetting
    2. vignetting, borderline dark/contrast
    I don't understand how these could have vignetting when they are cropped in. Is it an inverted vignetting (the light on the rotor) or could I of introduced it accidentally with editing(Pinetools showed a darker tendency towards the upper corners)? Any advice appreciated on that one buddy! I'll scrap any hopes for the Corendon though.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post
    Gooooood Evening!

    Could I get your thoughts on these please? Specifically sharpening artifacts and bodged colour.
    1. soft, dark, borderline vignetting
    2. vignetting, borderline dark/contrast

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  • LewisW295
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    Gooooood Evening!

    Could I get your thoughts on these please? Specifically sharpening artifacts and bodged colour.

    Thanks in advance!

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post
    Gooood Evening

    Can I please get some feedback on the following for the below concerns:

    Grob: Contrast & Dark specifically but looking at the preview, maybe a touch too soft?
    Red PA28 : Soft, Colour
    Beagle Pup: Soft & Horizon (shot with a large factory hangar in the background and very tight image. Struggled to check this in my editor)
    Black PA28: Dark
    Yak: Soft
    1. borderline soft/noisy
    2. soft
    3. borderline overexposed
    4. borderline (harsh) contrast
    5. borderline dark

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  • LewisW295
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    Gooood Evening

    Can I please get some feedback on the following for the below concerns:

    Grob: Contrast & Dark specifically but looking at the preview, maybe a touch too soft?
    Red PA28 : Soft, Colour
    Beagle Pup: Soft & Horizon (shot with a large factory hangar in the background and very tight image. Struggled to check this in my editor)
    Black PA28: Dark
    Yak: Soft

    Many thanks in advance

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post

    1. Halo around the tail?
    Halos around the whole aircraft it looks like.

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  • LewisW295
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    1. dark, overprocessed
    2. dark, horizon (ccw)
    1. Halo around the tail? I've tried to resolve it in this but I didn't touch the usual suspects that introduce this normally though I think I've solved it when fixing the darkness.
    2. Thank you

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post
    Good Evening

    Can I get some feedback on these two please? Really struggling with the black paintwork on the L29. Looks fine in the editor but quality dies off when exported and viewed in my native photo viewer (though the post preview seems to show it as it looks in LR)
    1. dark, overprocessed
    2. dark, horizon (ccw)

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  • LewisW295
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    Good Evening

    Can I get some feedback on these two please? Really struggling with the black paintwork on the L29. Looks fine in the editor but quality dies off when exported and viewed in my native photo viewer (though the post preview seems to show it as it looks in LR)



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  • LewisW295
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

    1. soft
    2. borderline soft
    3-4. borderline oversharpened

    Please upload with the correct information, otherwise the image stands to be rejected.
    Thanks matey. I'll make the adjustments before queing them.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by LewisW295 View Post
    Hey there,

    Cardiff hosted a fly-in this morning. Whilst the weather over the airfield was good, the lighting was a weird angle. Not quite backlit but not dead on the side. Could I get some feedback on these for that as well as oversharpening please? And any obvious errors too please! Also, a slight side question. I've submitted a new aircraft type so would I be correct in assuming that I need to wait for that to be checked before uploading the image of that aircraft to the que?
    1. soft
    2. borderline soft
    3-4. borderline oversharpened

    Please upload with the correct information, otherwise the image stands to be rejected.

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  • LewisW295
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    Hey there,

    Cardiff hosted a fly-in this morning. Whilst the weather over the airfield was good, the lighting was a weird angle. Not quite backlit but not dead on the side. Could I get some feedback on these for that as well as oversharpening please? And any obvious errors too please! Also, a slight side question. I've submitted a new aircraft type so would I be correct in assuming that I need to wait for that to be checked before uploading the image of that aircraft to the que?

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