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    Hey, this is going to be my first photo to be uploaded over here, so would like to know if this would get accepted or if there's any changes i need to make Click image for larger version

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    Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post
    Hey, this is going to be my first photo to be uploaded over here, so would like to know if this would get accepted or if there's any changes i need to make
    Hi, there are a few minor issues:

    - needs better L-R centering
    - minor editing halos visible
    - some compression visible
    - contrast too weak

    If you can fix those issues, it might be acceptable.

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    • #3
      I tried my best to apply the changes you suggested, this is what I came up with
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      • #4
        Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post
        I tried my best to apply the changes you suggested, this is what I came up with
        Too dark, editing halos are worse, and too low in the frame.

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        • #5
          Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

          Too dark, editing halos are worse, and too low in the frame.
          I don't have any idea how do I fix the halos on Lr mobile version, I followed up on your other advices Click image for larger version

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          • #6
            Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post

            I don't have any idea how do I fix the halos on Lr mobile version, I followed up on your other advices
            Would be rejected for centering, overprocessed, soft, and compression. Would suggest perhaps not trying to edit on a mobile device, as controlling assessing quality is much more difficult.

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            • #7
              Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

              Would suggest perhaps not trying to edit on a mobile device, as controlling assessing quality is much more difficult.
              well my iPad’s Lightroom supports my camera’s raw files and I don’t have any other option..

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              • #8
                also, could you please elaborate what’s wrong with the centering

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                • #9
                  I had another go at the editing, how do you feel about this now?
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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post
                    also, could you please elaborate what’s wrong with the centering
                    When centering the the aircraft, the distance from the highest point of the fuselage to the top of the image and the distance from the lowest point of the fuselage to the bottom of the image must be the same. I've tried to show in the attached that these are very different and this is the latest edit that you have done. Until you get this corrected, your images will always be rejected for centering.

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                    • #11
                      Thanks for pointing that out to me, I worked on that, is this good to go now?
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post
                        Thanks for pointing that out to me, I worked on that, is this good to go now?
                        Better; would still be rejected for soft, dirty, and overprocessed.

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by dlowwa View Post

                          Better; would still be rejected for soft, dirty, and overprocessed.
                          can these first two be improved?

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                          • #14
                            and as far as overprocessing goes, this is the raw file with just crop, no other changes made, is this fixable?


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                            • #15
                              Originally posted by theindianspotter View Post
                              and as far as overprocessing goes, this is the raw file with just crop, no other changes made, is this fixable?
                              No editing halos visible, but very soft, almost blurry.

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