theindianspotter - pre screening

[theindianspotter]

Hey, this is going to be my first photo to be uploaded over here, so would like to know if this would get accepted or if there's any changes i need to make

[dlowwa]

Hey, this is going to be my first photo to be uploaded over here, so would like to know if this would get accepted or if there's any changes i need to make

Hi, there are a few minor issues:

- needs better L-R centering
- minor editing halos visible
- some compression visible
- contrast too weak

If you can fix those issues, it might be acceptable.

[theindianspotter]

I tried my best to apply the changes you suggested, this is what I came up with

[dlowwa]

I tried my best to apply the changes you suggested, this is what I came up with

Too dark, editing halos are worse, and too low in the frame.

[theindianspotter]

Too dark, editing halos are worse, and too low in the frame.

I don't have any idea how do I fix the halos on Lr mobile version, I followed up on your other advices

[dlowwa]

I don't have any idea how do I fix the halos on Lr mobile version, I followed up on your other advices

Would be rejected for centering, overprocessed, soft, and compression. Would suggest perhaps not trying to edit on a mobile device, as controlling assessing quality is much more difficult.

[theindianspotter]

Would suggest perhaps not trying to edit on a mobile device, as controlling assessing quality is much more difficult.

well my iPad’s Lightroom supports my camera’s raw files and I don’t have any other option..

[theindianspotter]

also, could you please elaborate what’s wrong with the centering

[theindianspotter]

I had another go at the editing, how do you feel about this now?

[MarkLawrence]

also, could you please elaborate what’s wrong with the centering

When centering the the aircraft, the distance from the highest point of the fuselage to the top of the image and the distance from the lowest point of the fuselage to the bottom of the image must be the same. I've tried to show in the attached that these are very different and this is the latest edit that you have done. Until you get this corrected, your images will always be rejected for centering.

[theindianspotter]

Thanks for pointing that out to me, I worked on that, is this good to go now?

[dlowwa]

Thanks for pointing that out to me, I worked on that, is this good to go now?

Better; would still be rejected for soft, dirty, and overprocessed.

[theindianspotter]

Better; would still be rejected for soft, dirty, and overprocessed.

can these first two be improved?

[theindianspotter]

and as far as overprocessing goes, this is the raw file with just crop, no other changes made, is this fixable?

[dlowwa]

and as far as overprocessing goes, this is the raw file with just crop, no other changes made, is this fixable?

No editing halos visible, but very soft, almost blurry.