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  • Editing Advice/Review - AlexTakingFlight

    Hi, all

    Just had a couple of rejections, just wanted to check and see if my fixes are appropriate, or if they introduce more issues. (Both came back with "Too Dark" response)

    I mostly edit in Lightroom, so any advice on the best way to touch these up would be appreciated
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    Hello,
    I think the 1st is dirty overprocessed and maybe a bit low in the frame. Regarding the 2nd I'm afraid, that seems to be vunerable to contrast, which is caused by the aircraft not being lit properly(cloud).
    Not a screenerer though, just my opinion.

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    • #3
      Editing halos above wings and dust spots.
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      • #4
        Originally posted by AlexTakingFlight View Post
        Hi, all

        Just had a couple of rejections, just wanted to check and see if my fixes are appropriate, or if they introduce more issues. (Both came back with "Too Dark" response)
        AS mentioned there are still issues with centering, overprocessed, dust spots, and overprocessing. They are also still too dark. The second is probably not fixable.

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