Austin - Prescreening Request / Editing Advice

[dlowwa]

Hi sir, could you please check these photos for me? I'm especially unconfident about the sharpness lol
Thank you so much!

All a bit dark, 1, 4 some compression; 2-3 little bit of heat haze.

[Austin Izumi]

Hi sir, could you please check these photos for me? I'm especially unconfident about the sharpness lol
Thank you so much!

[Austin Izumi]

Foreground somewhat distracting on the second, otherwise ok for me.

Thank you so much sir!

[dlowwa]

Thank you sir. Could you please help me check these several photos?

Foreground somewhat distracting on the second, otherwise ok for me.

[Austin Izumi]

Overprocessed (poor vignetting corrections, borderline dark/soft.

Thank you sir. Could you please help me check these several photos? Thank you so much!

[dlowwa]

Oops, sorry, I guess I failed to upload the original image last time.
Please check the image attached to this thread.

Overprocessed (poor vignetting corrections, borderline dark/soft.

[Austin Izumi]

Oops, sorry, I guess I failed to upload the original image last time.
Please check the image attached to this thread.

[FandaSindelar]

I can only see the check for dust image.

[Austin Izumi]

Hi there! I used a lens adapter while spotting (Canon EF to Sony E) and therefore, there was significant vignetting on the original image.
I tried to use lens correction and luminosity masks to eliminate such effects. Now it seems a lot better to me, though I still wonder if it meets the requirement of JetPhotos.
The 1280px photo and the Check For Dust image are both attached below. Could anyone please offer me some suggestions? I'd be really grateful!