Kalyn - Prescreening Request / Editing Advice

[Kalyn Chester]

Honestly they look a touch oversharpened in order to try and hide some softness/blur.

Ahhh okay The first photo was indeed a bit blurry since my lens broke But I thought the second one would be fine...
I'll see what else I could do (or probably simply keep these two pics and Fiji 350 as my personal collection lol)
Thank you so much for your patience and advice sir! Have a great day.

[dlowwa]

Oops, is it a bit oversharpened this time? Or should I continue to sharpen it?

Honestly they look a touch oversharpened in order to try and hide some softness/blur.

[Kalyn Chester]

Still might be some issues with the sharpening.

Oops, is it a bit oversharpened this time? Or should I continue to sharpen it?

[dlowwa]

Hi sir, I have now improved the sharpness of the first and third photos (and fixed the horizon of 3), could you please check these for me?
Also, I was wondering if the 2nd pic is acceptable considering the shadow line shown in the Check For Dust image is lower than the windows.
Thank you so much!

Still might be some issues with the sharpening.

[Kalyn Chester]

Borderline, but would be ok for me. Not sure more editing will help.

Thank you sir!

[Kalyn Chester]

Some softness visible on most of them. 2 also nearly backlit, and 3 horizon off.

Hi sir, I have now improved the sharpness of the first and third photos (and fixed the horizon of 3), could you please check these for me?
Also, I was wondering if the 2nd pic is acceptable considering the shadow line shown in the Check For Dust image is lower than the windows.
Thank you so much!

[dlowwa]

Is the contrast of the fifth photo acceptable now?

Borderline, but would be ok for me. Not sure more editing will help.

[Kalyn Chester]

Some softness visible on most of them. 2 also nearly backlit, and 3 horizon off.

Okay, I'll try to fix the sharpness issue.
Is the contrast of the fifth photo acceptable now?
Thank you sir!

[dlowwa]

Thank you sir! I'll try to fix the contrast problem of the third photo.
Could you please prescreen these several photos? Thank you so much!

Some softness visible on most of them. 2 also nearly backlit, and 3 horizon off.

[Kalyn Chester]

1. ok for me
2. blurry, oversharpened. blurry is not fixable.
3. borderline contrast

Thank you sir! I'll try to fix the contrast problem of the third photo.
Could you please prescreen these several photos? Thank you so much!

[dlowwa]

Hi sir! I have reprocessed these photos and hopefully the issues are solved. But I'm still concerned about the sharpness of the first photo since it looks pretty sharp even though I didn't even sharp it... Guess it might be caused by the iPhone's camera sharpen algorithm or something. Could you please give me some feedback?

1. ok for me
2. blurry, oversharpened. blurry is not fixable.
3. borderline contrast

[Kalyn Chester]

1. oversharpened, horizon
2. soft/blurry
3. borderline dark/contrast

Hi sir! I have reprocessed these photos and hopefully the issues are solved. But I'm still concerned about the sharpness of the first photo since it looks pretty sharp even though I didn't even sharp it... Guess it might be caused by the iPhone's camera sharpen algorithm or something. Could you please give me some feedback? Thank you!

[Kalyn Chester]

1. oversharpened, horizon
2. soft/blurry
3. borderline dark/contrast

Thank you Mr. Low! I'll work on these problems

[Kalyn Chester]

I would agree with what fandasindelar said but I would try to give a little CW rotation and see how it goes. For third one, I don’t think truck is a big deal as I have seen lots of pics with trucks, but cutting the truck is definitely not gonna result a not centered rejection

Yeah I guess the truck won't be a problem. I'll fix the horizon of the first photo lol, I wanted to keep as much beautiful clouds as possible at first, but it indeed affected the horizon to a big extent.
Thanks for the advice!

[Kalyn Chester]

1) Seems okay to me, wait for the others to say their opinion
2)Lacks contrast
3)Aircraft is not centered (cut a bit of the tow truck)

Thanks for the advice!