Could this make it?

[chachu207]

Hi guys, just got this rejected for composition and motive, but I like it, and it shows alot of the details of the metalwork, so I was wondering if anyone had any tips for improvement?

http://www.jetphotos.net/viewreject_b.php?id=1268367

Gabe

[Simpleboy]

Motive wise is hard to get around, cropping wise you need to chop some of the sky off the top. I think its going to be hard to save this shot, however, if you had a shot from the same angle with all the wing it would stand a much better chance.

[chachu207]

Alright, thanks!