Rejected for oversharpening

[gouryella]

In my opinion the picture is not oversharped what do you think about it?

I edit the picture in photoshop so here's he now hopefully not oversharpened your opinion is welcome thanks in advance.

[Mark Ralph]

The second one is more acceptable, with that in mind now go back and look at the first for comparison I'm sure you'll see the difference. Not that it's a problem, but I prefered the first crop you had an even distance from the nose to the edge of the frame & similar from the right wing tip. Now you have tight crop to the right wing and dead space in front of the nose.

[gouryella]

yes i see the crop failure...going to correct it and try to upload the second picture again hopefully he's good than

[LX-A343]

At the risk of being too late: I would also try to correct the strong contrast. The shadows hardly show any details anymore.

[philh]

On the first pic look at the black outline of the red lines before the M of Martinair. They are very jagged, which means oversharpening has now taken place.

Now look at the second pic and the lines are smooth and nicely sharpened!

[gouryella]

thanks for all advice! i re-edit the picture and now going to upload it again in my opinion he's now perfect i will let you now if he is accepted or not.