2 close-ups of the same aircraft (Which one is the best)

[flyKSU]

Hi folks

I'm trying to experiment with one of my photos, and to make close-ups. 'm not shore if i should try to upload one of theese to JP, so I was hoping you guys would reviw them first?

Here they are:

[z740]

IMHO the second one is better but it still needs some work. Would tell you what it needs but I think it best to let a screener do the telling as I'm still sort of a newbie too.

-Chris

[ollieholmes]

I think the second ones best. Feels more balanced in the frame. To me it looks to dark.

[YYZPICS]

Try to crop up closer to the root of the wing, it looks a little grainy and aside from the bit of shrubs in your way ,and the lack of contrast, looks good!

[jid]

Both are dark noisy and soft, you will have your work cut out with either.

Jid