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  • #91
    Hello everyone,

    A pre-screen on these would be great!
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    I'm not sure about 'Special scheme' on the Norwegian as well.

    Thank you for your answers,
    All the best,
    Yannick

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    • #92
      Originally posted by YanS View Post
      Hello everyone,

      A pre-screen on these would be great!
      1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13840[/ATTACH]
      2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13841[/ATTACH]
      3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13842[/ATTACH]
      4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13843[/ATTACH]

      I'm not sure about 'Special scheme' on the Norwegian as well.

      Thank you for your answers,
      All the best,
      Yannick
      Hey

      #1 should be OK
      #2 looks a bit dark but otherwise OK (dont forget "special scheme" category)
      #3 should be OK
      #4 looks a bit unbalanced to me, try to center it a bit more (probably in 3:2 format). Otherwise no major issues IMO.

      About the "Special Scheme" on the Norwegian: Not needed here as Norwegian have different Persons on each Aircraft.

      Have a nice evening!
      Best Regards from Germany,
      Julian S.​

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      • #93
        Hi everyone,

        Thank you Julian for your feedback and congrats for beoming crew member

        I tried to improve the 737:
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        And some new ones:
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        Thank you for your advice,
        All the best
        Yannick

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        • #94
          Originally posted by YanS View Post
          Hi everyone,

          Thank you Julian for your feedback and congrats for beoming crew member

          I tried to improve the 737:
          1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13937[/ATTACH]

          And some new ones:
          2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13938[/ATTACH]
          3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13939[/ATTACH]
          4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13940[/ATTACH]
          5.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13941[/ATTACH]

          Thank you for your advice,
          All the best
          Yannick
          Hoi and thank you Yannick!

          #1 OK now
          #2 too high in Frame IMO
          #3 could use more contrast but other than that it should be OK
          #4 same as #2
          #5 same as #3

          Hope this helps, have a nice evening!
          Best Regards from Germany,
          Julian S.​

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          • #95
            Hello everyone,

            Would one of these work?
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ID:	1022542
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ID:	1022543

            Thank you for your advive,
            All the best,
            Yannick

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            • #96
              Originally posted by YanS View Post
              Hello everyone,

              Would one of these work?
              1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13971[/ATTACH]
              2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13972[/ATTACH]
              3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13973[/ATTACH]
              4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]13974[/ATTACH]

              Thank you for your advive,
              All the best,
              Yannick
              Some softness and the first might need a bit of CW rotation, but otherwise no major issues.

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              • #97
                Hello everyone,

                Today I got this picture ( https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413411 ) rejected.
                I don't really agree with the two points and as it also went through prescreening I think it's borderline.

                Is this one worth an appeal or do I see wrong?

                Thank you for your answers,
                All the Best,
                Yannick

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                • #98
                  Originally posted by YanS View Post
                  Hello everyone,

                  Today I got this picture ( https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413411 ) rejected.
                  I don't really agree with the two points and as it also went through prescreening I think it's borderline.

                  Is this one worth an appeal or do I see wrong?

                  Thank you for your answers,
                  All the Best,
                  Yannick
                  I'd argue not quite backlit, but yes, does need a little more contrast I think.

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                  • #99
                    Hi everyone,

                    Thank you very much for your help, dlowwa!
                    I will try to add more contrast.

                    A feedback on these would be great.
                    1.Click image for larger version

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ID:	1022792 (night shot category?)
                    2.Click image for larger version

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Views:	1
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ID:	1022793

                    Thank you for your replies,
                    All the best,
                    Yannick

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                    • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                      Hi everyone,

                      Thank you very much for your help, dlowwa!
                      I will try to add more contrast.

                      A feedback on these would be great.
                      1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]14255[/ATTACH] (night shot category?)
                      2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]14256[/ATTACH]

                      Thank you for your replies,
                      All the best,
                      Yannick
                      Hey

                      Both look OK to me and do not need the night shot category.
                      But keep in mind that there can be differences between the pre-screening and the final screening result.

                      Have a nice evening, Yannick!
                      Best Regards from Germany,
                      Julian S.​

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                      • Hi Julian,

                        Thank you for your help!
                        Of course there can be differences! Anything else would not be possible.
                        When I ask in the forum if a rejection was worth an appeal a positive pre-screening result is a useful argument to show that my position might be not totally made up out of thin air.

                        Best regards from Münster,
                        Yannick

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                        • Hi everyone,

                          Now I adjusted the BA A319. Is it better now?
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ID:	1022820

                          And two new ones:
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ID:	1022821
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ID:	1022822

                          Thank you for your answers,
                          All the best,
                          Yannick

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                          • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                            Hi everyone,

                            Now I adjusted the BA A319. Is it better now?
                            1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]14302[/ATTACH]

                            And two new ones:
                            2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]14303[/ATTACH]
                            3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]14304[/ATTACH]

                            Thank you for your answers,
                            All the best,
                            Yannick
                            1. ok for me
                            2-3 need tighter crops

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                            • Hi everyone,

                              Thank you dlowwa for your feedback! I will give BA a try and leave the others for my personal-collection as they become too soft when I crop them more.

                              All the best,
                              Yannick

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                              • Hi everyone,

                                Some older photos here. Are they OK?
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ID:	1023044 (was rejected a few months ago; I tried to improve the colour)
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                                Thank you for your answers,
                                Best regards,
                                Yannick

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