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  • Hi everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help again!
    I reworked the A350 and A321, this time without sharpening and also attached the originals for these two. It would be really nice if someone could have a look at the originals too and see if they are already oversharpened
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    As always, Thanks for your answers,
    Best regards,
    Yannick

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    • Originally posted by YanS View Post
      Hi everyone,

      Thanks dlowwa for your help again!
      I reworked the A350 and A321, this time without sharpening and also attached the originals for these two. It would be really nice if someone could have a look at the originals too and see if they are already oversharpened
      1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15862[/ATTACH]
      original for 1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15863[/ATTACH]
      2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15864[/ATTACH]
      original for 2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15865[/ATTACH]

      As always, Thanks for your answers,
      Best regards,
      Yannick
      Both still a little oversharpened. I can see from the originals that they are suffering from heat haze, which often makes hard lines look oversharpened.

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      • Hi everyone,

        Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I think I will keep these in my personal collection.

        Would this one be "hot" for the removed "WDL"-logo on the tail?
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        And another one for pre-screening:
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        Thanks for your answers,
        Best regards,
        Yannick

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        • Originally posted by YanS View Post
          Hi everyone,

          Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I think I will keep these in my personal collection.

          Would this one be "hot" for the removed "WDL"-logo on the tail?
          1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]16156[/ATTACH]

          And another one for pre-screening:
          2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]16157[/ATTACH]

          Thanks for your answers,
          Best regards,
          Yannick
          1. yes
          2. horizon (CCW)

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          • Hi everyone,

            Thanks for the help!
            The WDL-easyjet was rejected for contrast and dust. Dust was definetly my mistake, I just forgot to check that asI didn't have problems with dust for a long time.
            As this is my first dust-removal I want to be sure that I removed every dust-spot.
            Therefor I attached the equalized version.
            Click image for larger version

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            ...And the not-equalized for pre-screening:
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            Thanks for your answers,
            Best regards,
            Yannick

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            • Originally posted by YanS View Post
              Hi everyone,

              Thanks for the help!
              The WDL-easyjet was rejected for contrast and dust. Dust was definetly my mistake, I just forgot to check that asI didn't have problems with dust for a long time.
              As this is my first dust-removal I want to be sure that I removed every dust-spot.
              Therefor I attached the equalized version.
              [ATTACH=CONFIG]16166[/ATTACH]

              ...And the not-equalized for pre-screening:
              [ATTACH=CONFIG]16167[/ATTACH]

              Thanks for your answers,
              Best regards,
              Yannick
              I see slight issues with contrast, compression, and horizon (CCW). Dust shouldn't be an issue.

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              • Hi dlowwa,

                Contrast should be increased, right?

                Thanks,
                Yannick

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                • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                  Hi dlowwa,

                  Contrast should be increased, right?

                  Thanks,
                  Yannick
                  Correct.

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                  • Hi everyone again,

                    What about these few from Stuttgart?
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                    Thanks for your help,
                    All the best,
                    Yannick
                    Last edited by YanS; 2018-05-29, 16:49. Reason: added attachment ;)

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                    • Hi everyone,

                      Maybe my last pre-screen-request got lost

                      Thanks for your replies,
                      Best regards,
                      Yannick

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                      • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                        Hi everyone,

                        Maybe my last pre-screen-request got lost

                        Thanks for your replies,
                        Best regards,
                        Yannick
                        Yannick,

                        I'm not a screener but IMHO:

                        1 and 2. appear to be dark
                        3. motive (cut off)
                        4. dark
                        5. dark and a bit high in frame.

                        Better wait comments from the screeners.

                        Regards,

                        Vinicius

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                        • Hi... I agree with Vinicius.
                          Try pushing light a bit. On the example below, based on the histogram, there is still room for light and contrast.

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                          Best regards,
                          Cristian

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                          • Hi Vinicius and Cristian,

                            Thank you very much for your two helpful answers . I‘ll improve the exposure and see if I can find a better crop for 3 and 5.

                            Best regards to South America,
                            Yannick
                            Last edited by YanS; 2018-05-30, 14:56. Reason: Spelling mistake

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                            • Hi everyone,

                              Last week I was able to visit the great "Technikmuseum Sinsheim" (museum of technology Sinsheim) and see some fantastic cars and planes.
                              Would these be OK?
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                              Thanks for your answers,
                              All the best,
                              Yannick

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                              • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                                Hi everyone,

                                Last week I was able to visit the great "Technikmuseum Sinsheim" (museum of technology Sinsheim) and see some fantastic cars and planes.
                                Would these be OK?
                                1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]16277[/ATTACH] ( These "editing halos" around the main-gear are spikes against doves )
                                2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]16278[/ATTACH]

                                Thanks for your answers,
                                All the best,
                                Yannick
                                Both should be ok.

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