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  • thank you Vinicius Dana

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    • Hello JP crew, for corrections please

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      • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
        Hello JP crew, for corrections please

        [ATTACH=CONFIG]18173[/ATTACH]
        Would be rejected for overprocessed/manipulation. Please don't apply such filters to the sky.

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        • Thank you dana, and news pictures for corrections

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          Olivier

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          • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
            Thank you dana, and news pictures for corrections

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            Olivier
            1. borderline contrast/horizon
            2. borderline contrast
            3-4 soft, horizon
            5. contrast

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            • Thank Dana for your answer.

              how can I repare? by adding exposure and contrast?

              https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6807256

              Best regards

              Olivier

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              • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                Thank Dana for your answer.

                how can I repare? by adding exposure and contrast?

                https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6807256

                Best regards

                Olivier
                Contrast is too low.

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                • [QUOTE = dlowwa; 671145] Le contraste est trop faible. [/ QUOTE]

                  After correction it's better or not?
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                  • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                    [QUOTE = dlowwa; 671145] Le contraste est trop faible. [/ QUOTE]

                    After correction it's better or not?
                    [ATTACH=CONFIG]18791[/ATTACH]

                    Thank you
                    Bit too dark now.

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                    • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                      Bit too dark now.
                      Ok thank, new correction with more expo

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                      blue on blue, hard hard!!!!!!!

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                      • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                        Ok thank, new correction with more expo

                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]18797[/ATTACH]

                        blue on blue, hard hard!!!!!!!
                        It's not the blue that's the issue, it's the shadows on the underside of the aircraft. They are either too strong, or washed out. Latest is better, but still borderline.

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                        • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                          It's not the blue that's the issue, it's the shadows on the underside of the aircraft. They are either too strong, or washed out. Latest is better, but still borderline.
                          Thank you, I dimmed the shadows

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                          See you soon

                          Olivier

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                          • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                            Thank you, I dimmed the shadows

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                            See you soon

                            Olivier
                            In this case the shadows were already too weak, so making the weaker is counterproductive.

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                            • [QUOTE = dlowwa; 671200] Dans ce cas, les ombres étaient déjà trop faibles, ce qui rend le plus faible est contre-productif. [/ QUOTE]


                              Thank Dana for your patience!!!! new correction

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                              • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                                [QUOTE = dlowwa; 671200] Dans ce cas, les ombres étaient déjà trop faibles, ce qui rend le plus faible est contre-productif. [/ QUOTE]


                                Thank Dana for your patience!!!! new correction

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]18823[/ATTACH]
                                Better, but still borderline as it's a bit harsh now.

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