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  • Hello JP crew, I have a doubt but I think it must be good !!!!!!

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    Thank you and good New Year's eve

    Olivier

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    • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
      Hello JP crew, I have a doubt but I think it must be good !!!!!!

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      Thank you and good New Year's eve

      Olivier
      1. Overexposed
      2. Looks ok
      3. Overexposed
      4. Soft in places
      5. Bad contrast/colour - the reds appear orange and overall a yellow tint.

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      • I just made the changes. I did a white balance for the aeroflot (5) but initially it was a yellow light of a low winter sun

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        and thank you for the speed answer.

        Olivier

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        • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
          I just made the changes. I did a white balance for the aeroflot (5) but initially it was a yellow light of a low winter sun

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          and thank you for the speed answer.

          Olivier
          I think you over-corrected the Aeroflot, but otherwise don't see any major issues.

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          • Thank you Dana, Alex, B772ADL and JP Crew, HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!!!!

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            • Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

              Please for correction

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              See you soon

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              • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

                Please for correction

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                See you soon
                These would be similar, so please choose just one.

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                • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                  Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

                  Please for correction

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                  See you soon
                  both lack contrast.
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                  • Thank you Alex for your answer.

                    Finally we had a little sun on Roissy !!!
                    Some photos for correction

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                    how can i improve this one or is it passable

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                    See you soon

                    Olivier

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                    • Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                      Thank you Alex for your answer.

                      Finally we had a little sun on Roissy !!!
                      Some photos for correction

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                      how can i improve this one or is it passable

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                      See you soon

                      Olivier
                      Borderline oversharpened on 1 & 4, but otherwise ok.

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                      • Thank you Dana

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                        • Hello, I have a doubt on two points, the first is on the obstruction of the wheels and the second on the tail of the plane, see if it is not too fair

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                          Thank you in advance

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                          • hi,
                            the obstruction is borderline but should be just ok. The crop on the tail is too tight for me but some other screeners might think it's acceptable

                            Regards
                            Alex

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                            • Thank you Alex

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                              • For correction please

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                                and these

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                                see you soon
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