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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    https://www.jetphotos.com/viewreject_b.php?id=6834840

    Can someone please point me to where I went wrong with this one. (just wanted to add - there was no comment on the rejection email - hence my reason for asking).
    Pretty strong cyan/green cast.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    https://www.jetphotos.com/viewreject_b.php?id=6834840

    Can someone please point me to where I went wrong with this one. (just wanted to add - there was no comment on the rejection email - hence my reason for asking).
    Last edited by MarkLawrence; 2018-10-10, 16:36.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana!

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]18627[/ATTACH]

    Trying another in the series of this Easyjet because the last one was dark and too much/little (I suspect too much) contrast. Comments on this one please...
    Some compression in the sky, and maybe a touch dark, but otherwise ok.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Trying another in the series of this Easyjet because the last one was dark and too much/little (I suspect too much) contrast. Comments on this one please...

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana - back to the drawing board......

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Sill working on one set with regards to colors - I'm still learning about the camera and what is needed to process the pictures from it correctly. Can I get a pre-screen on this one please.

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    A bit dark and yellow, and there seems to be a poor job of masking around the aircraft where you've done some extra sharpening or noise reduction.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Sill working on one set with regards to colors - I'm still learning about the camera and what is needed to process the pictures from it correctly. Can I get a pre-screen on this one please.

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  • PrestonFiedler
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    I would agree, the inboard slat, as well as the bottom of the leading edge of the nacelle look quite heat hazed.

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  • Alex - Spot-This !
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    The heat from the engine goes behind the wing, here you can see that the front of the wing, specially the part close to fuselage is heat hazed. I also think it's the main issue here.

    Regards
    Alex

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Gerardo - just a question - can the heat haze be confused for the exhaust gases from the engines? Just wondering....

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  • LX-A343
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    This was rejected for soft before and I have adjusted the sharpening - is it acceptable now?

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    Borderline. In my opinion, there is too much heat haze, which makes the aircraft look soft.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    This was rejected for soft before and I have adjusted the sharpening - is it acceptable now?

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana - I have quite a few available to work on - just wanted to make sure the crop was okay.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Is this too close a crop or due to the uniqueness of the detail, would this be acceptable?

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    Close up angels like that are ok, but the crop on the right is a bit awkward. Borderline contrast as well.

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