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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana ... I'll try and save these for cooler weather... Florida is really warm at the moment probably causing the amount of heat haze.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Dana - I tried a different frame and a different size - does this make any difference?

    Thanks very much
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    Slightly better, but still noticeable enough for a rejection imho.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Dana - I tried a different frame and a different size - does this make any difference?

    Thanks very much
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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Thanks Dana - do you think a smaller resolution might be able to work on the FedEx - with some more sharpening in it?
    Perhaps

    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    I'm struggling to see particularly in what area the heat haze is evident.
    Pretty obvious on the engine nacelles.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana - do you think a smaller resolution might be able to work on the FedEx - with some more sharpening in it? I'm struggling to see particularly in what area the heat haze is evident.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Could a screener please give pre-screening on these two - particularly with crop and heat haze in mind, but any other observations as well.

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    Thanks
    Heat haze/softness is noticeable on both; crop on second definitely would be an issue, but the first is probably ok.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Could a screener please give pre-screening on these two - particularly with crop and heat haze in mind, but any other observations as well.

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    Thanks
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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Dana - I tried a different image with a different crop - please can you comment on this one with regards to acceptability. This is my first attempt at this type of close up, so please bear with me working through the issues

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    Soft, noisy, borderline overprocessed.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Dana - I tried a different image with a different crop - please can you comment on this one with regards to acceptability. This is my first attempt at this type of close up, so please bear with me working through the issues

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Thanks Dana - will work on that.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    Could I please get a screeners comments on this - particularly the crop, but other aspects of pre-screening too. The sun when rising is almost dead east of the runway .. so worried about backlit to but, Click image for larger version

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    Not my personal taste for crop, but nothing technically wrong with it. Image also somewhat noisy.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    Could I please get a screeners comments on this - particularly the crop, but other aspects of pre-screening too. The sun when rising is almost dead east of the runway .. so worried about backlit to but, Click image for larger version

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by MarkLawrence View Post
    I am not sure if this is heat hazed or if it is simply gases from the engines causing the effect. Could a screener please have a look and let me know, as well as any other potential issues?

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    There is definitely heat haze on the front part of the aircraft, forward of the engine exhaust. As such, almost certainly a heat haze/soft rejection.

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  • MarkLawrence
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    I am not sure if this is heat hazed or if it is simply gases from the engines causing the effect. Could a screener please have a look and let me know, as well as any other potential issues?

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  • MarkLawrence
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    I thought there were other issues, but I wasn't sure of the backlit, etc. to start with before I tried anything else with it. Thanks Dana.

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