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  • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
    Thanks Dana. Can I have your opinion on these 5 shots?

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    I'm aware that no. 1, 2 & 5 might suffer from contrast problems. If they do please let me know if they can be fixed or not.
    Have a nice day,
    Dara
    1,2 and 5 suffer indeed from lack of contrast. Ask yourself, if you really want to have them in your portfolio or wait for a better chance.
    3, 4: OK
    My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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    • Hey guys,
      I have this one rejected for "horizon" and "category". For the "horizon" part, I think it should be fine. What do you think?
      https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7057559
      Cheers,
      Dara

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      • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
        Hey guys,
        I have this one rejected for "horizon" and "category". For the "horizon" part, I think it should be fine. What do you think?
        https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7057559
        Cheers,
        Dara
        Agree horizon looks ok, but I would have added soft as well.

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        • Thanks Dana, would be happy to have your comments on these two shots:
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          • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
            Thanks Dana, would be happy to have your comments on these two shots:
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            Have a nice day
            Both a bit dark & noisy, and the second soft as well.

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            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
              Both a bit dark & noisy, and the second soft as well.
              For the dark part, should I elevate the midtones? Or do you mean the overall exposure?

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              • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                For the dark part, should I elevate the midtones? Or do you mean the overall exposure?
                Overall.

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                • Hey guys, would be glad to have your comment on these shots:
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                  Have a nice day,
                  Dara

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                  • 1) poor/dull contrast
                    2) should be ok
                    3) a bit too dark and 0.2 CCW rotation needed

                    Regards
                    Alex

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                    • Originally posted by Alex - Spot-This ! View Post
                      1) poor/dull contrast
                      2) should be ok
                      3) a bit too dark and 0.2 CCW rotation needed

                      Regards
                      Alex
                      Thanks Alex

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                      • Would be happy to have your comment on this An-74 cockpit shot.
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                        Cheers,
                        Dara

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                        • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                          Would be happy to have your comment on this An-74 cockpit shot.
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                          Cheers,
                          Dara
                          The contrast between the underexposed cockpit and the overexposed window kills it.
                          My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                          • Originally posted by LX-A343 View Post
                            The contrast between the underexposed cockpit and the overexposed window kills it.
                            Is there a technique you can suggest when taking these kind of shots? Would using a flash make a difference?

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                            • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                              Is there a technique you can suggest when taking these kind of shots? Would using a flash make a difference?
                              A HUGE difference! Using a fill flash is exactly what you need.
                              My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                              • It's WAY better and looks acceptable

                                Just the last one that could be rejected for "motive" because of the very recognisable people in the frame.
                                Regards
                                Alex

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