Pre-screen -DARA

[dlowwa]

Thanks Dana, any suggestions regarding no. 3? I thought adding to the shadows in Camera RAW would help but it seems it didn't.

Not really, since the underside is not lit, it's just a poor angle.

[darazarbaf]

Hey guys,
Can I have your comment on these shots? Some of them are re-edited.







For the last one, which category should I tick in the form? Is it considered as a terminal shot or ramp shot?

Cheers,
Dara

[pdeboer]

Hey guys,
Can I have your comment on these shots? Some of them are re-edited.

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For the last one, which category should I tick in the form? Is it considered as a terminal shot or ramp shot?

Cheers,
Dara

first looks rather dark and unleveled, second contrast and soft, third dark/contrast, fourth looks acceptable, last look like primarily a terminal

[darazarbaf]

first looks rather dark and unleveled, second contrast and soft, third dark/contrast, fourth looks acceptable, last look like primarily a terminal

Thanks Pamela.

[darazarbaf]

Hey guys,

Can I have your comment on these shots please?







Thanks,
Dara

[LX-A343]

Hey guys,

Can I have your comment on these shots please?

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Thanks,
Dara

All of them more or less dark and contrast issues. 2, 4 and 5 also slightly leaning to the right.

[darazarbaf]

Hi guys,
Can I please have your comment on these three shots?





Thanks,
Dara

[dlowwa]

Hi guys,
Can I please have your comment on these three shots?

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Thanks,
Dara

Last one a bit soft and dark; quality ok for me on the other two.

[darazarbaf]

Last one a bit soft and dark; quality ok for me on the other two.

Thanks Dana. Is the last one any better now?



Cheers,
Dara

[dlowwa]

Thanks Dana. Is the last one any better now?

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Cheers,
Dara

Still quite soft, almost blurry.

[darazarbaf]

Hi guys,
Can I have your comment on this shot please?



Cheers,
Dara

[dlowwa]

Hi guys,
Can I have your comment on this shot please?

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Cheers,
Dara

Soft and dark/poor contrast.

[darazarbaf]

Soft and dark/poor contrast.

I did another go with this one. Can I please have your comment on these 5 shots?







Thanks,
Dara

[dlowwa]

I did another go with this one. Can I please have your comment on these 5 shots?

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Thanks,
Dara

1. soft, borderline contrast
2. soft, centering
3. obstruction
4. ok
5. borderline soft/centering

[darazarbaf]

Hey guys,

I've got a rejection on this shot:

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7454280

Can I have your comments please?

Cheers,
Dara