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  • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
    Thanks Dana, any suggestions regarding no. 3? I thought adding to the shadows in Camera RAW would help but it seems it didn't.
    Not really, since the underside is not lit, it's just a poor angle.

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    • Hey guys,
      Can I have your comment on these shots? Some of them are re-edited.

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      For the last one, which category should I tick in the form? Is it considered as a terminal shot or ramp shot?

      Cheers,
      Dara

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      • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
        Hey guys,
        Can I have your comment on these shots? Some of them are re-edited.

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        For the last one, which category should I tick in the form? Is it considered as a terminal shot or ramp shot?

        Cheers,
        Dara
        first looks rather dark and unleveled, second contrast and soft, third dark/contrast, fourth looks acceptable, last look like primarily a terminal

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        • Originally posted by pdeboer View Post
          first looks rather dark and unleveled, second contrast and soft, third dark/contrast, fourth looks acceptable, last look like primarily a terminal
          Thanks Pamela.

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          • Hey guys,

            Can I have your comment on these shots please?

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            Thanks,
            Dara

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            • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
              Hey guys,

              Can I have your comment on these shots please?

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              Thanks,
              Dara
              All of them more or less dark and contrast issues. 2, 4 and 5 also slightly leaning to the right.
              My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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              • Hi guys,
                Can I please have your comment on these three shots?

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                Thanks,
                Dara

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                • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                  Hi guys,
                  Can I please have your comment on these three shots?

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                  Thanks,
                  Dara
                  Last one a bit soft and dark; quality ok for me on the other two.

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                  • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                    Last one a bit soft and dark; quality ok for me on the other two.
                    Thanks Dana. Is the last one any better now?

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                    Cheers,
                    Dara

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                    • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                      Thanks Dana. Is the last one any better now?

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                      Cheers,
                      Dara
                      Still quite soft, almost blurry.

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                      • Hi guys,
                        Can I have your comment on this shot please?

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                        Cheers,
                        Dara

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                        • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                          Hi guys,
                          Can I have your comment on this shot please?

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                          Cheers,
                          Dara
                          Soft and dark/poor contrast.

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                          • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                            Soft and dark/poor contrast.
                            I did another go with this one. Can I please have your comment on these 5 shots?

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                            Thanks,
                            Dara

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                            • Originally posted by darazarbaf View Post
                              I did another go with this one. Can I please have your comment on these 5 shots?

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                              Thanks,
                              Dara
                              1. soft, borderline contrast
                              2. soft, centering
                              3. obstruction
                              4. ok
                              5. borderline soft/centering

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                              • Hey guys,

                                I've got a rejection on this shot:
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                                Can I have your comments please?

                                Cheers,
                                Dara

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