Cedarjet201 - Pre Screening

[dlowwa]

Good Evening,
Could I please get these pre-screened, please

Thanks in Advance.

1. [ATTACH=CONFIG]17977[/ATTACH]
2. [ATTACH=CONFIG]17978[/ATTACH]
3. [ATTACH=CONFIG]17979[/ATTACH]
4. [ATTACH=CONFIG]17980[/ATTACH]

1. vignetting
2. borderline contrast
3. vignetting, borderline cut off (tight crop)
4. contrast

[Cedarjet201]

1. vignetting
2. borderline contrast
3. vignetting, borderline cut off (tight crop)
4. contrast

Hello Danna Thank you for taking some of your time in pre-screening my photos,
with contrast for number 4 does that mean its over done or underdone?
Thanks

[dlowwa]

Hello Danna Thank you for taking some of your time in pre-screening my photos,
with contrast for number 4 does that mean its over done or underdone?
Thanks

As with 95% of contrast rejections, the contrast is too low.

[Cedarjet201]

As with 95% of contrast rejections, the contrast is too low.

Ok great so I've edited my best now here are my latest fixes

1.
2. (Different picture but same angle)
3.
4.

Thanks

[pdeboer]

Ok great so I've edited my best now here are my latest fixes

1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]18004[/ATTACH]
2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]18005[/ATTACH] (Different picture but same angle)
3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]18006[/ATTACH]
4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]18007[/ATTACH]

Thanks

No. 1 still seems to have some vignetting, furthermore dark and cut off wing tips.
No. 2 acceptable, but very tight crop, imo some 'air' on left and right side (only a bit) would make it better
No.3 too dark and cut off (stab)
No. 4 underside of fuselage looks rather dark, also angle seems quite steep?

[Cedarjet201]

No. 1 still seems to have some vignetting, furthermore dark and cut off wing tips.
No. 2 acceptable, but very tight crop, imo some 'air' on left and right side (only a bit) would make it better
No.3 too dark and cut off (stab)
No. 4 underside of fuselage looks rather dark, also angle seems quite steep?

Hello Thanks for your pre-screen advice so far I have come out with the following with fixes

1. made the crop bit tighter can't go more since it will crop the body top to bottom. (Can't get the whole plane in frame due to some landing light poles in the way)
2. made the crop more tight on the left side as you suggested
3. fixed the shadows slightly and also uncropped the clipped stab
4. fixed the rotation angle seems fine now also fixed the shadows to make the underside brighter slightly

Cheers

Wael.

[dlowwa]

Hello Thanks for your pre-screen advice so far I have come out with the following with fixes

1. [ATTACH=CONFIG]18018[/ATTACH] made the crop bit tighter can't go more since it will crop the body top to bottom. (Can't get the whole plane in frame due to some landing light poles in the way)
2. [ATTACH=CONFIG]18019[/ATTACH] made the crop more tight on the left side as you suggested
3. [ATTACH=CONFIG]18020[/ATTACH] fixed the shadows slightly and also uncropped the clipped stab
4. [ATTACH=CONFIG]18021[/ATTACH] fixed the rotation angle seems fine now also fixed the shadows to make the underside brighter slightly

Cheers

Wael.

1. soft
2. borderline contrast
3. ok
4. contrast