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  • A330-343X
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    How about these ?
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    I think they are ok, but I want to make sure here.
    One more thing - the 3rd photo should be uploaded as 'Airport Overview' or 'Ramp' ???
    Thank You !

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  • A330-343X
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    Originally posted by Alex - Spot-This ! View Post
    Hi,
    They look acceptable to me even if I'm not a big fan of the barbed wire on the 2nd one

    Regards
    Alex
    Thanks !

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  • Alex - Spot-This !
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    Hi,
    They look acceptable to me even if I'm not a big fan of the barbed wire on the 2nd one

    Regards
    Alex

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  • A330-343X
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    Next ones please:
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    Thank You in advance

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    Thanks !
    As to photo #1, I've corrected it, I've added contrast, and played around a bit with curves adjusting shadows, and also sharpened it because, I've found it was a bit soft - and that also made the heat haze visible: [ATTACH=CONFIG]19328[/ATTACH] now it should be ok .
    Contrast is too harsh, would still be rejected for contrast/heat haze.

    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    Next ones please:
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]19329[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19330[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19331[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19332[/ATTACH]
    Thank You in advance.
    Max 5 per 24 hours please.

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  • A330-343X
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    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
    1. contrast, heat haze
    2. ok
    3. dark/contrast
    4- 5 ok
    Thanks !
    As to photo #1, I've corrected it, I've added contrast, and played around a bit with curves adjusting shadows, and also sharpened it because, I've found it was a bit soft - and that also made the heat haze visible: Click image for larger version

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    Next ones please:
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    Thank You in advance.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    How abouth these ?
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]19302[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19303[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19304[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19305[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19306[/ATTACH]
    Thanks.
    1. contrast, heat haze
    2. ok
    3. dark/contrast
    4- 5 ok

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  • A330-343X
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    How abouth these ?
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    Thanks.

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    Bump
    1. borderline oversharpened
    2. overprocessed
    3. contrast
    4. ok
    5. contrast

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  • A330-343X
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]19148[/ATTACH] - again: less sharp, ok ? [ATTACH=CONFIG]19149[/ATTACH] according to hints - added more contrast, [ATTACH=CONFIG]19150[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19151[/ATTACH] - is sharper now, as it was soft, shadows were also increased according to hints, [ATTACH=CONFIG]19152[/ATTACH]
    Thanks in advance ,
    Bump

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  • A330-343X
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]19148[/ATTACH] - again: less sharp, ok ? [ATTACH=CONFIG]19149[/ATTACH] according to hints - added more contrast, [ATTACH=CONFIG]19150[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]19151[/ATTACH] - is sharper now, as it was soft, shadows were also increased according to hints, [ATTACH=CONFIG]19152[/ATTACH]
    Thanks in advance ,
    Bump

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  • A330-343X
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ID:	1030752 - again: less sharp, ok ? Click image for larger version

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    Thanks in advance ,

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  • LX-A343
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    Thanks !

    I know this, but when the aircraft like 777 comes to my 'home airport', I think it's worth documenting (I'm also aware that You don't care about stories behind photos uploaded to Your site) and that is the reason I try to make it acceptable .
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]18990[/ATTACH] corrected this one, is a bit less sharp now, and I hope that it's finally ok , [ATTACH=CONFIG]18991[/ATTACH] in this one I've reduced shadows a bit, so the contrast to be less harsh, [ATTACH=CONFIG]18992[/ATTACH][ATTACH=CONFIG]18993[/ATTACH] added more contrast in these two, and new one please: [ATTACH=CONFIG]18994[/ATTACH]
    Thank You
    1: still over sharpen
    2: harsh contrast (due to the relative position of the sun), soft
    3: lacks contrast due to the weather
    4: borderline contrast
    4: soft, contrast (shadows lacking details)

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  • A330-343X
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    Thanks !
    Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
    You really need to consider shooting in better light conditions; doing so will make things much easier for you if you are hoping to have the images accepted.
    I know this, but when the aircraft like 777 comes to my 'home airport', I think it's worth documenting (I'm also aware that You don't care about stories behind photos uploaded to Your site) and that is the reason I try to make it acceptable .
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ID:	1030633 corrected this one, is a bit less sharp now, and I hope that it's finally ok , Click image for larger version

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ID:	1030634 in this one I've reduced shadows a bit, so the contrast to be less harsh, Click image for larger version

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    Thank You

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  • dlowwa
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    Originally posted by A330-343X View Post
    Ok. Thank You !

    Corrected ones:
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]18931[/ATTACH] (as You've said it was soft in places, I've sharpened it a bit), [ATTACH=CONFIG]18932[/ATTACH] (I've made this one less sharp and removed grain), Tried this one again, I've edited it according to Your hints, reduced contrast and exposure a bit [ATTACH=CONFIG]18933[/ATTACH]

    [ATTACH=CONFIG]18934[/ATTACH] (I've added contrast and shadows in this one)

    Are they ok after corrections ?

    and new one please:
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    Thanks in advance
    1. borderline oversharpened now
    2. dark/harsh contrast
    3. borderline contrast/exposure
    4-5 contrast

    You really need to consider shooting in better light conditions; doing so will make things much easier for you if you are hoping to have the images accepted.

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