ThatOneFish- Prescreening/Editing Advice

[LX-A343]

hello, I had these two rejected for soft, and overexposed. I attempted to appeal the a320, but failed. (Had to rework since that original raw was on my laptop)
I sharpened them some more, but I fear that I oversharpened, and is exposure acceptable now? Thanks.

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7680838

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7680846

[ATTACH=CONFIG]29718[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29719[/ATTACH]

Both are still a bit too soft.

[ThatOneFish]

hello, I had these two rejected for soft, and overexposed. I attempted to appeal the a320, but failed. (Had to rework since that original raw was on my laptop)
I sharpened them some more, but I fear that I oversharpened, and is exposure acceptable now? Thanks.

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7680838

https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7680846

[dlowwa]

hello, is this too backlit?
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29702[/ATTACH]

Yes.

[ThatOneFish]

hello, is this too backlit?

[pdeboer]

Last one before I attempt to submit:
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Is the color better? I sharpened some more, but don't want to oversharpen.
Thanks.

It looks acceptable to me

[ThatOneFish]

Last one before I attempt to submit:


Is the color better? I sharpened some more, but don't want to oversharpen.
Thanks.

[dlowwa]

Will save the rest for personal.

I think I found a sharper shot for the last one, hows sharpness/contrast now?
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29615[/ATTACH]

Thanks.

Borderline for soft and slight yellow/green tint.

[ThatOneFish]

You are correct, softness and contrast (except for the last) is an issue for all of them. Only the last one is fixable.

Will save the rest for personal.

I think I found a sharper shot for the last one, hows sharpness/contrast now?


Thanks.

[dlowwa]

Hello, I have a prescreen?
The Sun got blocked when I arrived so I am worried about lack of contrast. Softness as well.
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29611[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29612[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29613[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29614[/ATTACH]

You are correct, softness and contrast (except for the last) is an issue for all of them. Only the last one is fixable.

[ThatOneFish]

Hello, I have a prescreen?
The Sun got blocked when I arrived so I am worried about lack of contrast. Softness as well.

[ThatOneFish]

First borderline soft/heat hazed yes; both also borderline overexposed.

Thanks, I’ll bring the exposure down before trying to submit.

[dlowwa]

Hello, may I get a prescreen. Worried about softness/heathaze on both.
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29489[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]29490[/ATTACH]

First borderline soft/heat hazed yes; both also borderline overexposed.

[ThatOneFish]

Hello, may I get a prescreen. Worried about softness/heathaze on both.

[dlowwa]

hello dana, would 2 be considered hot since it has a new paintjob compared to its most recent?.

Yes.

[ThatOneFish]

hello dana, would 2 be considered hot since it has a new paintjob compared to its most recent?

https://www.jetphotos.com/photo/8905208

thanks.