dp.aviation02 Pre-Screening/Editing Advice thread

[dp.aviation02]

1: Overall not bad, but the shadows are too strong, best visible on the pitch black wheels lacking any detail.
2: OK
3: Contrast: aircraft looks a bit flat, shadows again clipped and lacking details
4: A bit too high
5: Looks still a bit soft IMO, as if the original photo was slightly out of focus or blurry.

Thank you! I will take that feedback into consideration. For the first one, if I fix the shadows, do you think it should be good to upload?

[LX-A343]

Hi,

Could a moderator please pre screen the following:

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Concerned about the angle

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Composition

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Centering

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Composition

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This is the dreamliner from the previous posts. I have tried to sharpen it again, I am not sure if this is too much.

Thanks!

1: Overall not bad, but the shadows are too strong, best visible on the pitch black wheels lacking any detail.
2: OK
3: Contrast: aircraft looks a bit flat, shadows again clipped and lacking details
4: A bit too high
5: Looks still a bit soft IMO, as if the original photo was slightly out of focus or blurry.

[dp.aviation02]

Hi,

Could a moderator please pre screen the following:


Concerned about the angle


Composition


Centering


Composition


This is the dreamliner from the previous posts. I have tried to sharpen it again, I am not sure if this is too much.

Thanks!

[dp.aviation02]

Hi,

Thanks for the feedback. I am a bit confused as to what compressed means, if someone could clarify that or lead me to a thread with info on it that would be great.

[pdeboer]

Hi,

I would appreciate it if you could pre screen these photos. Thanks

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2 and 4 seem a bit compressed, rest looks OK

[dp.aviation02]

Hi,

I would appreciate it if you could pre screen these photos. Thanks

[dp.aviation02]

It's flat due to slightly overcast light. You can try bumping up the contrast/exposure, but not sure how successful that would be.



A fair amount.

Ok, Thanks for the help.

[dlowwa]

Thanks. For the 4th one, should I increase the contrast or decrease it?

It's flat due to slightly overcast light. You can try bumping up the contrast/exposure, but not sure how successful that would be.

Also, how much more sharpening do you think I should give the dreamliner? Thanks

A fair amount.

[dp.aviation02]

1. ok
2. contrast
3. soft
4. borderline contrast
5. borderline soft

Thanks. For the 4th one, should I increase the contrast or decrease it? Also, how much more sharpening do you think I should give the dreamliner? Thanks

[dlowwa]

Hi,

I have attached 5 more photos for pre screening if you have the chance. The last one is the same dreamliner photo, sharpened even more. I hope its enough but not too much.

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contrast/lighting concern

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composition/angle

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and version 3 of the dreamliner.

Thanks for your help! Much appreciated!

1. ok
2. contrast
3. soft
4. borderline contrast
5. borderline soft

[dp.aviation02]

1. ok
2. soft
3. dark/contrast. not fixable
4. ok
5. borderline soft

Hi,

I have attached 5 more photos for pre screening if you have the chance. The last one is the same dreamliner photo, sharpened even more. I hope its enough but not too much.




contrast/lighting concern


composition/angle




and version 3 of the dreamliner.

Thanks for your help! Much appreciated!

[dlowwa]

Do you think the A321N is fixable?

Yes.

[dp.aviation02]

1. ok
2. soft
3. dark/contrast. not fixable
4. ok
5. borderline soft

Thanks for the feedback! I will correct the dreamliner and repost it tonight, as I would like to respect the 24 hour limit. Do you think the A321N is fixable?

[dlowwa]

Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could pre screen the following:


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This one I had a few concerns with the sharpness and composition.

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Same here, composition

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I was concerned with the exposure here.

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I sharpened the AA dreamliner from the previous request, is this good now or should I sharpen more/less?

1. ok
2. soft
3. dark/contrast. not fixable
4. ok
5. borderline soft

[dp.aviation02]

First is a bit soft, but the rest would be acceptable for me. Centering on the last is a bit low, but should also be ok with the composition.

Hi, I would really appreciate it if you could pre screen the following:





This one I had a few concerns with the sharpness and composition.


Same here, composition


I was concerned with the exposure here.


I sharpened the AA dreamliner from the previous request, is this good now or should I sharpen more/less?