Bapt0708: Pre-screening/How to do a better editing ?

[dlowwa]

No problem, your help is really appreciated.

May i have a pre-screening please.
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Thank you.

1. soft
2. borderline soft/horizon
3. soft, overprocessed

Don't see any dust spots, but the birds would be better off removed since some could consider them dirt.

[bapt0708]

I reworked all of them.



I removed some birds.
What are you saying by horizon ?

[dlowwa]

I reworked all of them.
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I removed some birds.
What are you saying by horizon ?

1. ok
2. needs CW rotation
3. still soft towards nose & birds

[bapt0708]

I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?

Removed the birds and added sharpening.

[dlowwa]

I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
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Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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1. still needs CW. also soft in spots
2. oversharpened now

[bapt0708]

Reworked the 777.

Reworked the 737 from a previous version.

Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

[dlowwa]

Reworked the 777.
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Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

1. needs CW rotation. all background vertical references are leaning left.
2. borderline oversharpened

[bapt0708]

Normally this is better.

Unsharpened a little bit.

[dlowwa]

Normally this is better.
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Unsharpened a little bit.
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1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
2. borderline oversharpened

Last time to comment on these.

[bapt0708]

1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now

How can i fix a frame problem ?

[dlowwa]

How can i fix a frame problem ?

Crop it differently, so the aircraft is more in the center.

[meeshboi]

How can i fix a frame problem ?

Make sure the middle of the aircraft is in the middle of the frame, and then make even spaces on both sides along with the top and bottom.

[bapt0708]

Hello,
Thank you for your help.
May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.

[dlowwa]

Hello,
Thank you for your help.
May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.
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1. centering, horizon
2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
3. soft/blurry, vignetting
4. dark/contrast, soft

[bapt0708]

1. centering, horizon
2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
3. soft/blurry, vignetting
4. dark/contrast, soft

Is it better ?

2 and 3 are really too blurry i can't do better.
4 is really dark and i can't do better with this very bad exposure.