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  • #76
    Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
    No problem, your help is really appreciated.

    May i have a pre-screening please.
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    Thank you.
    1. soft
    2. borderline soft/horizon
    3. soft, overprocessed

    Don't see any dust spots, but the birds would be better off removed since some could consider them dirt.

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    • #77
      I reworked all of them.
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      I removed some birds.
      What are you saying by horizon ?

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      • #78
        Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
        I reworked all of them.
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        I removed some birds.
        What are you saying by horizon ?
        1. ok
        2. needs CW rotation
        3. still soft towards nose & birds

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        • #79
          I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
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          Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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          • #80
            Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
            I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]25995[/ATTACH]
            Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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            1. still needs CW. also soft in spots
            2. oversharpened now

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            • #81
              Reworked the 777.
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              Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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              Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

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              • #82
                Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                Reworked the 777.
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                Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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                Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.
                1. needs CW rotation. all background vertical references are leaning left.
                2. borderline oversharpened

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                • #83
                  Normally this is better.
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                  Unsharpened a little bit.
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                  • #84
                    Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                    Normally this is better.
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                    Unsharpened a little bit.
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                    1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
                    2. borderline oversharpened

                    Last time to comment on these.

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                    • #85
                      Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                      1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
                      How can i fix a frame problem ?

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                      • #86
                        Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                        How can i fix a frame problem ?
                        Crop it differently, so the aircraft is more in the center.

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                        • #87
                          Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                          How can i fix a frame problem ?
                          Make sure the middle of the aircraft is in the middle of the frame, and then make even spaces on both sides along with the top and bottom.

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                          • #88
                            Hello,
                            Thank you for your help.
                            May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.
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                            • #89
                              Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                              Hello,
                              Thank you for your help.
                              May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.
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                              1. centering, horizon
                              2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
                              3. soft/blurry, vignetting
                              4. dark/contrast, soft

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                              • #90
                                Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                                1. centering, horizon
                                2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
                                3. soft/blurry, vignetting
                                4. dark/contrast, soft
                                Is it better ?
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                                2 and 3 are really too blurry i can't do better.
                                4 is really dark and i can't do better with this very bad exposure.

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