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  • #76
    Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
    No problem, your help is really appreciated.

    May i have a pre-screening please.
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    Thank you.
    1. soft
    2. borderline soft/horizon
    3. soft, overprocessed

    Don't see any dust spots, but the birds would be better off removed since some could consider them dirt.

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    • #77
      I reworked all of them.
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      I removed some birds.
      What are you saying by horizon ?

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      • #78
        Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
        I reworked all of them.
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        I removed some birds.
        What are you saying by horizon ?
        1. ok
        2. needs CW rotation
        3. still soft towards nose & birds

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        • #79
          I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
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          Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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          • #80
            Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
            I lined up the photos with the building is it better ?
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]25995[/ATTACH]
            Removed the birds and added sharpening.
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            1. still needs CW. also soft in spots
            2. oversharpened now

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            • #81
              Reworked the 777.
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              Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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              Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.

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              • #82
                Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                Reworked the 777.
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                Reworked the 737 from a previous version.
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                Last question, how can you see that a photo need a rotation ? I aligned the 777 with the ground before, and it was not good.
                1. needs CW rotation. all background vertical references are leaning left.
                2. borderline oversharpened

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                • #83
                  Normally this is better.
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                  Unsharpened a little bit.
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                  • #84
                    Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                    Normally this is better.
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                    Unsharpened a little bit.
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                    1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
                    2. borderline oversharpened

                    Last time to comment on these.

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                    • #85
                      Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                      1. horizon ok, but too low in the frame now
                      How can i fix a frame problem ?

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                      • #86
                        Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                        How can i fix a frame problem ?
                        Crop it differently, so the aircraft is more in the center.

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                        • #87
                          Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                          How can i fix a frame problem ?
                          Make sure the middle of the aircraft is in the middle of the frame, and then make even spaces on both sides along with the top and bottom.
                          View me on JetPhotos

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                          • #88
                            Hello,
                            Thank you for your help.
                            May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.
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                            • #89
                              Originally posted by bapt0708 View Post
                              Hello,
                              Thank you for your help.
                              May i have a pre-screening of these 4 please.
                              [ATTACH=CONFIG]26206[/ATTACH]
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                              1. centering, horizon
                              2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
                              3. soft/blurry, vignetting
                              4. dark/contrast, soft

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                              • #90
                                Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                                1. centering, horizon
                                2. soft/blurry, vignetting, dirty
                                3. soft/blurry, vignetting
                                4. dark/contrast, soft
                                Is it better ?
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                                2 and 3 are really too blurry i can't do better.
                                4 is really dark and i can't do better with this very bad exposure.

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