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  • #61
    Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
    Thanks. One last try with reduced Click image for larger version

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    I can still see jagged egdes
    My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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    • #62
      Oh no.. Changed my raw editor from CaptureOne to Lightroom. Please let me know now. Click image for larger version

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      • #63
        Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
        Oh no.. Changed my raw editor from CaptureOne to Lightroom. Please let me know now. Click image for larger version

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        Much better!
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        • #64
          Hi.. Would something like this be acceptable or it has too much distractions? Thanks! Click image for larger version

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          • #65
            Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
            Hi.. Would something like this be acceptable or it has too much distractions?
            Don't see any 'distractions', unless you care to be more specific.

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            • #66
              Sure.. Like the wires towards the bottom of the frame running along the length that I am unable to crop. The roof of the food service building with A/C condensers and other things on the top at the bottom right corner. Overlapping tail of the American with the front wheels of EK.

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              • #67
                Also, other thoughts or comments on the photo? Thank you.

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                • #68
                  Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
                  Sure.. Like the wires towards the bottom of the frame running along the length that I am unable to crop. The roof of the food service building with A/C condensers and other things on the top at the bottom right corner. Overlapping tail of the American with the front wheels of EK.
                  Those should be non-issues. Quality-wise, contrast is a bit weak.

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                  • #69
                    OK, can you please look at it now? I added a small amount of contrast. Also, slightly adjusted the crop. Thanks! Click image for larger version

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                    • #70
                      Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
                      OK, can you please look at it now? I added a small amount of contrast. Also, slightly adjusted the crop.
                      Crop needs to be tighter, especially on the right.

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                      • #71
                        OK, thank you. Adjusted and will submit. Click image for larger version

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                        • #72
                          Hello everyone. Can you please provide feedback on these 2 images? Thanks! Click image for larger version

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                          • #73
                            Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
                            Hello everyone. Can you please provide feedback on these 2 images? Thanks! Click image for larger version

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                            1. horizon, vignetting
                            2. horizon, centering

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                            • #74
                              Thank you. Please see below the updated pictures. For horizon, in the top picture, I used the vertical black line (shadow) on the control tower. For the bottom one I used the building's edge. Before I was using runway marking lines, but I read the guidelines again and it said use vertical towards center of the frame rather than horizontal.
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                              • #75
                                Originally posted by arora7dm View Post
                                Thank you. Please see below the updated pictures. For horizon, in the top picture, I used the vertical black line (shadow) on the control tower. For the bottom one I used the building's edge. Before I was using runway marking lines, but I read the guidelines again and it said use vertical towards center of the frame rather than horizontal.
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                                Better, but both might still need a touch of CW.

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