(arora7dm) - prescreening request / editing advice

[LX-A343]

Thanks. One last try with reduced sharpening.

I can still see jagged egdes

[arora7dm]

Oh no.. Changed my raw editor from CaptureOne to Lightroom. Please let me know now.

[LX-A343]

Oh no.. Changed my raw editor from CaptureOne to Lightroom. Please let me know now.

Much better!

[arora7dm]

Hi.. Would something like this be acceptable or it has too much distractions? Thanks!

[dlowwa]

Hi.. Would something like this be acceptable or it has too much distractions?

Don't see any 'distractions', unless you care to be more specific.

[arora7dm]

Sure.. Like the wires towards the bottom of the frame running along the length that I am unable to crop. The roof of the food service building with A/C condensers and other things on the top at the bottom right corner. Overlapping tail of the American with the front wheels of EK.

[arora7dm]

Also, other thoughts or comments on the photo? Thank you.

[dlowwa]

Sure.. Like the wires towards the bottom of the frame running along the length that I am unable to crop. The roof of the food service building with A/C condensers and other things on the top at the bottom right corner. Overlapping tail of the American with the front wheels of EK.

Those should be non-issues. Quality-wise, contrast is a bit weak.

[arora7dm]

OK, can you please look at it now? I added a small amount of contrast. Also, slightly adjusted the crop. Thanks!

[dlowwa]

OK, can you please look at it now? I added a small amount of contrast. Also, slightly adjusted the crop.

Crop needs to be tighter, especially on the right.

[arora7dm]

OK, thank you. Adjusted and will submit.

[arora7dm]

Hello everyone. Can you please provide feedback on these 2 images? Thanks!

[dlowwa]

Hello everyone. Can you please provide feedback on these 2 images? Thanks!

1. horizon, vignetting
2. horizon, centering

[arora7dm]

Thank you. Please see below the updated pictures. For horizon, in the top picture, I used the vertical black line (shadow) on the control tower. For the bottom one I used the building's edge. Before I was using runway marking lines, but I read the guidelines again and it said use vertical towards center of the frame rather than horizontal.

[dlowwa]

Thank you. Please see below the updated pictures. For horizon, in the top picture, I used the vertical black line (shadow) on the control tower. For the bottom one I used the building's edge. Before I was using runway marking lines, but I read the guidelines again and it said use vertical towards center of the frame rather than horizontal.

Better, but both might still need a touch of CW.