Alber Rs - Editing Advice

[Alber Rs]

I recently had this photograph rejected for Bad Composition (bad framing / aircraft not centered), I would like to get it for the next time how to center it better
Pdt I edited it like this because I thought that if the rudder was seen more
Thanks

[dlowwa]

I recently had this photograph rejected for Bad Composition (bad framing / aircraft not centered), I would like to get it for the next time how to center it better
Pdt I edited it like this because I thought that if the rudder was seen more

Needs to be cropped tighter on the left and without cropping the tail.

[Alber Rs]

Needs to be cropped tighter on the left and without cropping the tail.

Thank you very much for the information. And as for the position of the plane, is it ok that low?

[Alber Rs]

pre-screening opinion

[dlowwa]

pre-screening opinion

1. soft, noisy
2-3. similar

[Alber Rs]

Opinion

[dlowwa]

Opinion

1. soft/blurry
2. obstruction
3. overprocessed, soft, borderline contrast

[Alber Rs]

Opinion

[dlowwa]

Opinion

All would be rejected.

[Alber Rs]

What would be a good centering of the photo?

[Alber Rs]

All would be rejected.

Could you tell me the reasons?

[dlowwa]

Could you tell me the reasons?

Softness, contrast, centering/crop.

[Alber Rs]

Suavidad, contraste, centrado/recorte.

Ok Thanks

[Alber Rs]

Hello, would it be acceptable?

[dlowwa]

Hello, would it be acceptable?

Looks like some oversharpening/heat haze happening, but it might just be because of a poor edit.