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Delta95Heavy - Prescreening/Rejection Help
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“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by Delta95Heavy View Post
You said borderline heat haze on my AF777 and it got accepted and that was a further shot than this, but ok. On the AF 359, up the exposure and give it some contrast or does it have too much?
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Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
It's too dark as it is; I'd see if it could be brightened up without losing too much contrast.
“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
Exposure better, but as I suspected, contrast a bit washed out now.
“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
Better than original post, but still borderline at best for dark/contrast.“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
Not bad, but need better centering. Too much dead space in the top half.“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by Delta95Heavy View Post
Glad you like! Here's a slightly re-edited version. Took out most of the dead space up above the tower and some other adjustments.
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Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
Centering/composition looks fine to me; my only concern would be the lack of light in most of the frame, and the glare/lens flare from the lights bottom left.
Anyways, this one I am giving another go. The only reason for the rejection was for being a bit dark. Is this edit better? Thanks as always Dana!
Last edited by Delta95Heavy; 2022-06-25, 00:19. Reason: Re-edit and re-upload of the original per some advice further in thread.“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by conoramoia View PostHi Buddy,
Its been a few years for me but I think dark might be referring to the difference I highlighted below.“In the ongoing battle between objects made of aluminum going hundreds of miles per hour and the ground going zero miles per hour, the ground has yet to lose.” – Anonymous
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Originally posted by Delta95Heavy View Post
I don't think there's much more I can do with that. If I lower the frame to rid the flare from the foreground lights, I have too much sky in the upper. I'm probably going to just keep this one for Instagram.
Anyways, this one I am giving another go. The only reason for the rejection was for being a bit dark. Is this edit better? Thanks as always Dana!
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