I'm not a screener but I don't think this photo would be acceptable on many grounds. First of all, it's quite dark/underexposed. Second, the photo is not cropped at all so the aircraft is also not centered. Lastly, and the biggest issue that unfortunately can not be corrected in post-production would be how soft the image is. Some items that can help with this are usually increasing the shutter speed and depending on the lens turning off image stabilization.