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    Hi everyone,

    I tried to fix the problems with the Vueling. Is it better now?
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    #2 was rejected for bad color in the past. I hope it's better now.

    Thank you for your help,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    Last edited by YanS; 04-16-2018 at 06:56 PM. Reason: forgot the KLM ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi everyone,

    I tried to fix the problems with the Vueling. Is it better now?
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    What about these?
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Views:	14 
Size:	1.08 MB 
ID:	15035
    3.Click image for larger version. 

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    #2 was rejected for bad color in the past. I hope it's better now.

    Thank you for your help,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    1. color still a bit orange, contrast a bit harsh, and noise/compression visible
    2. horizon (needs CW)
    3. horizon (needs a lot of CW)
    4. crop is a bit wide, but maybe ok

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    Hi everyone!

    Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I will work on the first three and maybe give the F70 a try.

    Yesterday this photo (https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6513622) was rejected for bad color and horizon.
    I‘m not really sure what‘s wrong about the two aspects, so I ask for help here.

    Thank you for your answers,
    All the Best,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi everyone!

    Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I will work on the first three and maybe give the F70 a try.

    Yesterday this photo (https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6513622) was rejected for bad color and horizon.
    I‘m not really sure what‘s wrong about the two aspects, so I ask for help here.

    Thank you for your answers,
    All the Best,
    Yannick
    Color I'm not sure, but looks like it needs a tiny bit of CCW rotation.

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    Hello everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

    Some new ones for pre-screening here...
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    I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

    Thank you for your replies,
    All the best,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hello everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

    Some new ones for pre-screening here...
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    I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

    Thank you for your replies,
    All the best,
    Yannick
    Hello Yannick,

    I'm not screener but if I can help you. Now you can always ask for confirmation from a screener.

    1 contrast borderline

    2 soft on the nose

    3 seems ok

    4 I'll put the fuselage horizontally, it's weird

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    Olivier

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    Hi Olivier,

    Thanks for your answer

    Au revoir,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hello everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

    Some new ones for pre-screening here...
    1.Click image for larger version. 

Name:	IMG_6007v2.jpg 
Views:	14 
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ID:	15691
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Name:	IMG_6168v2.jpg 
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    3.Click image for larger version. 

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    I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

    Thank you for your replies,
    All the best,
    Yannick
    First three a bit dark, but other than that no major issues.

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    Hi dlowwa,

    Sounds good!
    Thank you for your answer too

    Best regards,
    Yannick

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    Hi again,

    a few more for pre-screening...
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    Thank you for your feedback,
    Best regards,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi again,

    a few more for pre-screening...
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    Thank you for your feedback,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    1, 2, 4: Borderline soft
    3, 5: OK

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    Hi everyone,

    Thanks LX-A343 for your answer!
    What about these two?

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    Thank you for your replies,
    All the best,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi everyone,

    Thanks LX-A343 for your answer!
    What about these two?

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    Thank you for your replies,
    All the best,
    Yannick
    Borderline oversharpened and contrast, respectively.

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    Hi everyone,

    Thanks, dlowwa for your advice. I tried to to correct the mistakes. The A350 also appeard a bit high in the frame to me.

    Are they better now?
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    And some new ones for pre-screening
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    Thank you very much for your replies,
    Best regards,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi everyone,

    Thanks, dlowwa for your advice. I tried to to correct the mistakes. The A350 also appeard a bit high in the frame to me.

    Are they better now?
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ID:	15827
    2.Click image for larger version. 

Name:	IMG_6243v3.jpg 
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ID:	15828

    And some new ones for pre-screening
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Name:	IMG_6386v2.jpg 
Views:	14 
Size:	1.02 MB 
ID:	15829
    4.Click image for larger version. 

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    Thank you very much for your replies,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    1. oversharpened
    2. borderline color/contrast
    3-4 oversharpened
    5. ok

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    Hi everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help again!
    I reworked the A350 and A321, this time without sharpening and also attached the originals for these two. It would be really nice if someone could have a look at the originals too and see if they are already oversharpened
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    As always, Thanks for your answers,
    Best regards,
    Yannick

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    Quote Originally Posted by YanS View Post
    Hi everyone,

    Thanks dlowwa for your help again!
    I reworked the A350 and A321, this time without sharpening and also attached the originals for these two. It would be really nice if someone could have a look at the originals too and see if they are already oversharpened
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    2.Click image for larger version. 

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    original for 2.Click image for larger version. 

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    As always, Thanks for your answers,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    Both still a little oversharpened. I can see from the originals that they are suffering from heat haze, which often makes hard lines look oversharpened.

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