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  • Hi everyone,

    I tried to fix the problems with the Vueling. Is it better now?
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    What about these?
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    #2 was rejected for bad color in the past. I hope it's better now.

    Thank you for your help,
    Best regards,
    Yannick
    Last edited by YanS; 2018-04-16, 18:56. Reason: forgot the KLM ;)

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    • Originally posted by YanS View Post
      Hi everyone,

      I tried to fix the problems with the Vueling. Is it better now?
      1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15034[/ATTACH]

      What about these?
      2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15035[/ATTACH]
      3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15036[/ATTACH]
      4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15037[/ATTACH]

      #2 was rejected for bad color in the past. I hope it's better now.

      Thank you for your help,
      Best regards,
      Yannick
      1. color still a bit orange, contrast a bit harsh, and noise/compression visible
      2. horizon (needs CW)
      3. horizon (needs a lot of CW)
      4. crop is a bit wide, but maybe ok

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      • Hi everyone!

        Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I will work on the first three and maybe give the F70 a try.

        Yesterday this photo (https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6513622) was rejected for bad color and horizon.
        I‘m not really sure what‘s wrong about the two aspects, so I ask for help here.

        Thank you for your answers,
        All the Best,
        Yannick

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        • Originally posted by YanS View Post
          Hi everyone!

          Thanks, dlowwa for your feedback! I will work on the first three and maybe give the F70 a try.

          Yesterday this photo (https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6513622) was rejected for bad color and horizon.
          I‘m not really sure what‘s wrong about the two aspects, so I ask for help here.

          Thank you for your answers,
          All the Best,
          Yannick
          Color I'm not sure, but looks like it needs a tiny bit of CCW rotation.

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          • Hello everyone,

            Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

            Some new ones for pre-screening here...
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            I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

            Thank you for your replies,
            All the best,
            Yannick

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            • Originally posted by YanS View Post
              Hello everyone,

              Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

              Some new ones for pre-screening here...
              1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15691[/ATTACH]
              2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15692[/ATTACH]
              3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15693[/ATTACH]
              4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15694[/ATTACH]

              I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

              Thank you for your replies,
              All the best,
              Yannick
              Hello Yannick,

              I'm not screener but if I can help you. Now you can always ask for confirmation from a screener.

              1 contrast borderline

              2 soft on the nose

              3 seems ok

              4 I'll put the fuselage horizontally, it's weird

              Regards

              Olivier

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              • Hi Olivier,

                Thanks for your answer

                Au revoir,
                Yannick

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                • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                  Hello everyone,

                  Thanks dlowwa for your help! I'll try to correct that

                  Some new ones for pre-screening here...
                  1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15691[/ATTACH]
                  2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15692[/ATTACH]
                  3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15693[/ATTACH]
                  4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15694[/ATTACH]

                  I'm not sure about the horizon on the Iberia...

                  Thank you for your replies,
                  All the best,
                  Yannick
                  First three a bit dark, but other than that no major issues.

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                  • Hi dlowwa,

                    Sounds good!
                    Thank you for your answer too

                    Best regards,
                    Yannick

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                    • Hi again,

                      a few more for pre-screening...
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                      Thank you for your feedback,
                      Best regards,
                      Yannick

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                      • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                        Hi again,

                        a few more for pre-screening...
                        1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15731[/ATTACH]
                        2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15732[/ATTACH]
                        3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15733[/ATTACH]
                        4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15734[/ATTACH]
                        5.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15735[/ATTACH]

                        Thank you for your feedback,
                        Best regards,
                        Yannick
                        1, 2, 4: Borderline soft
                        3, 5: OK
                        My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                        • Hi everyone,

                          Thanks LX-A343 for your answer!
                          What about these two?

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                          Thank you for your replies,
                          All the best,
                          Yannick

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                          • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                            Hi everyone,

                            Thanks LX-A343 for your answer!
                            What about these two?

                            1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15768[/ATTACH]
                            2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15769[/ATTACH]

                            Thank you for your replies,
                            All the best,
                            Yannick
                            Borderline oversharpened and contrast, respectively.

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                            • Hi everyone,

                              Thanks, dlowwa for your advice. I tried to to correct the mistakes. The A350 also appeard a bit high in the frame to me.

                              Are they better now?
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                              And some new ones for pre-screening
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                              Thank you very much for your replies,
                              Best regards,
                              Yannick

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                              • Originally posted by YanS View Post
                                Hi everyone,

                                Thanks, dlowwa for your advice. I tried to to correct the mistakes. The A350 also appeard a bit high in the frame to me.

                                Are they better now?
                                1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15827[/ATTACH]
                                2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15828[/ATTACH]

                                And some new ones for pre-screening
                                3.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15829[/ATTACH]
                                4.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15830[/ATTACH]
                                5.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15831[/ATTACH]

                                Thank you very much for your replies,
                                Best regards,
                                Yannick
                                1. oversharpened
                                2. borderline color/contrast
                                3-4 oversharpened
                                5. ok

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