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  • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
    Thanks for your feedback, Dana. I've uploaded both.

    Can I have some comments in this two?

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    Many thanks!
    Borderline soft/heat haze, but probably ok.

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    • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
      Borderline soft/heat haze, but probably ok.
      Thanks for the feedback, Dana. There is any point that I can improve the sharpness or the softness in only because the heat haze?

      Cheers,

      Vinicius

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      • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
        Thanks for the feedback, Dana. There is any point that I can improve the sharpness or the softness in only because the heat haze?

        Cheers,

        Vinicius
        You can't really hide haze with more sharpening, so probably best to just see how it goes.

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        • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
          You can't really hide haze with more sharpening, so probably best to just see how it goes.

          Thanks, Dana. I uploaded, let's see the results soon. Also can I have prescreen in this three shots?

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          Many thanks,

          Vinicius

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          • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
            Thanks, Dana. I uploaded, let's see the results soon. Also can I have prescreen in this three shots?

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            Many thanks,

            Vinicius
            1. borderline overprocessed, compression
            2. compression (in sky)
            3. borderline exposure/contrast (harsh light)

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            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
              1. borderline overprocessed, compression
              2. compression (in sky)
              3. borderline exposure/contrast (harsh light)
              Thanks for the feedback, Dana. Unfortunately the originals (1 and 2) has compression in the sky (really don't know why as I have others from the same batch without compression). I tried to correct without success.

              Can I have some opinions in this shots?

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              Thanks,

              Vinicius

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              • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                Thanks for the feedback, Dana. Unfortunately the originals (1 and 2) has compression in the sky (really don't know why as I have others from the same batch without compression). I tried to correct without success.

                Can I have some opinions in this shots?

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                Thanks,

                Vinicius
                Both lack details in the shadows. Maybe you can tweak the curves to brighten up the photo without getting clipped highlights.
                My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                • Originally posted by LX-A343 View Post
                  Both lack details in the shadows. Maybe you can tweak the curves to brighten up the photo without getting clipped highlights.
                  Thanks for the feedback, Gerardo! I will apply your advices and post here soon to get some comments.

                  Can I have prescreen in this shots?

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                  Thanks!

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                  • the darks/shadows are very dark

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                    • Originally posted by pdeboer View Post
                      the darks/shadows are very dark
                      Hi Pamela, thanks for you reply!

                      I`ve adjusted the dark/shadows. The photos looks better now?

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                      Many thanks!

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                      • They are improved, i would accept 2 and 3 , 1 still looks rather dark in the shadows

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                        • Originally posted by pdeboer View Post
                          They are improved, i would accept 2 and 3 , 1 still looks rather dark in the shadows
                          Pamela, thanks for your feedback! I will upload numbers #2 and #3. About the number #1, looks better now?

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                          Many thanks!

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                          • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                            Pamela, thanks for your feedback! I will upload numbers #2 and #3. About the number #1, looks better now?

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                            Many thanks!
                            Color looks a bit off, but I would accept it.

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                            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                              Color looks a bit off, but I would accept it.

                              Dana, I tried to correct a bit the color and also tried to keep the advices that Pamela said about the dark/shadows aspect. What do you think now?

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                              Can I have some advices in this shots too?

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                              Many thanks!

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                              • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                                Dana, I tried to correct a bit the color and also tried to keep the advices that Pamela said about the dark/shadows aspect. What do you think now?

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                                Can I have some advices in this shots too?

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                                Many thanks!
                                1-3 ok
                                4-5 borderline soft

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