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  • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
    1-3 ok
    4-5 borderline soft
    Dana, thanks for you reply!

    Can I have some comments in this shots?

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    Sorry to post more than 5 photos to prescreen in one day yesterday, didn't notice this. I will pay more attention next time

    Thanks!

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    • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
      Dana, thanks for you reply!

      Can I have some comments in this shots?

      #1. [ATTACH=CONFIG]15209[/ATTACH] [another photo from the batch, do more sharpening in the last number #5 did not look good].
      #2. [ATTACH=CONFIG]15208[/ATTACH]

      Sorry to post more than 5 photos to prescreen in one day yesterday, didn't notice this. I will pay more attention next time

      Thanks!
      Both are passable for me.

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      • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
        Both are passable for me.
        Thanks, Dana. I will upload both.

        Can I have some comments in this two?

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        Thanks!

        Vinicius

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        • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
          Thanks, Dana. I will upload both.

          Can I have some comments in this two?

          #1.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15211[/ATTACH]
          #2.[ATTACH=CONFIG]15212[/ATTACH]

          Thanks!

          Vinicius
          Borderline soft for the second, otherwise ok.

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          • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
            Borderline soft for the second, otherwise ok.
            Dana, I reduced the image size and sharpened again. Looks better now?


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            Also...this kind of composition is acceptable?

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            Thanks!

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            • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
              Dana, I reduced the image size and sharpened again. Looks better now?


              #1. [ATTACH=CONFIG]15223[/ATTACH]

              Also...this kind of composition is acceptable?

              #2. [ATTACH=CONFIG]15224[/ATTACH]

              Thanks!
              1. sharpness ok for me
              2. I'd probably put it a bit higher

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              • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                1. sharpness ok for me
                2. I'd probably put it a bit higher
                Thanks for you comments, Dana. I will edit number #2 again and put a bit higher to see the result.

                Can I have some comments in this shot?

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                Many Thanks!

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                • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                  Thanks for you comments, Dana. I will edit number #2 again and put a bit higher to see the result.

                  Can I have some comments in this shot?

                  #1. [ATTACH=CONFIG]15228[/ATTACH]

                  Many Thanks!
                  Likely rejected for horizon and centering.

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                  • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                    Likely rejected for horizon and centering.
                    Dana, thanks for your reply.

                    I use the buildings to get my vertical references, Can you please help me to solve this horizon issue? About the centering: I did this composition because of the TAP a/c in the background, you think this motive is not enough?

                    Your comments and suggestions will be much appreciated as I have a batch of photos with this same background that I took in my trip. With this I can learn and not do the same mistake again.

                    Best,

                    Vinicius Cruvinel

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                    • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                      Dana, thanks for your reply.

                      I use the buildings to get my vertical references, Can you please help me to solve this horizon issue? About the centering: I did this composition because of the TAP a/c in the background, you think this motive is not enough?

                      Your comments and suggestions will be much appreciated as I have a batch of photos with this same background that I took in my trip. With this I can learn and not do the same mistake again.

                      Best,

                      Vinicius Cruvinel
                      Verticals are all leaning a little left. Second aircraft is too far and not prominent enough for me to justify the centering, but others may disagree.

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                      • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                        Verticals are all leaning a little left. Second aircraft is too far and not prominent enough for me to justify the centering, but others may disagree.
                        Thanks for your explanation. I tried to correct the issues, can you please tell me if looks better now?

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                        Also, can I have some comments in this two shots?

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                        Many thanks!

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                        • Hi!

                          I got this rejection [overexposed]: https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6517397

                          I'm not complain about the rejection, just want to know which points I can improve in the photo to learn and correct this issue.

                          I appreciate any comments.

                          Thanks,

                          Vinicius Cruvinel

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                          • Originally posted by vcruvinel View Post
                            Hi!

                            I got this rejection [overexposed]: https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6517397

                            I'm not complain about the rejection, just want to know which points I can improve in the photo to learn and correct this issue.

                            I appreciate any comments.

                            Thanks,

                            Vinicius Cruvinel
                            The highlights are slightly burned out, the rest looks OK. In such occasions I try to tweak the curves to lower the highlights without darkening the whole photo.
                            My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                            • Originally posted by LX-A343 View Post
                              The highlights are slightly burned out, the rest looks OK. In such occasions I try to tweak the curves to lower the highlights without darkening the whole photo.
                              Nice, Gerardo. Many thanks for you explanation and feedback. I will try to correct and post here to get some comments. Taking the opportunity, can you please give me some comments in my previous post (before my question about the rejection)?

                              Thanks!

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                              • Hi!

                                Can I have some comments in this photo?

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                                Thanks!

                                Vinicius

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