vcruvinel - Editing advice

[vcruvinel]

Should be fine.

Thanks Dana. Have a nice night!

Vinicius Cruvinel

[vcruvinel]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shots?

1.
2.

Thanks!

[pdeboer]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shots?

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Thanks!

1. borderline, contrast is a bit high (rear end seems overexposed)
2. looks acceptable

[vcruvinel]

1. borderline, contrast is a bit high (rear end seems overexposed)
2. looks acceptable

Pamela, many thanks for you reply.

I will adjust the number #1 and send here again to get some comments. About the number #2 I will upload as it looks acceptable.

Many Thanks.

[vcruvinel]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shot? I did a new version adjusting the contrast and the overexposed area in the tail.



And also this new one:



Many Thanks!

[LX-A343]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shot? I did a new version adjusting the contrast and the overexposed area in the tail.

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And also this new one:

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Many Thanks!

1: too high in the frame, exposure is OK
2: looks OK

[vcruvinel]

1: too high in the frame, exposure is OK
2: looks OK

Gerardo, many thanks for you reply! You are right, I checked again and #1 is to high in frame. I will correct this issue and send here again to get some comments. Number #2 I will upload as it looks acceptable.

Thanks!

Vinicius Cruvinel

[vcruvinel]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shot?




Also I tried to correct the problem (center the aircraft) in this one, looks better now? Any other issue?

(I put this one in the queue to check centering and forgot to delete, already deleted to get prescreen)

Many thanks!

[dlowwa]

Hi!

Can I have some feedback in this shot?


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Also I tried to correct the problem (center the aircraft) in this one, looks better now? Any other issue?

[ATTACH=CONFIG]14593[/ATTACH] (I put this one in the queue to check centering and forgot to delete, already deleted to get prescreen)

Many thanks!

First is oversharpened, but otherwise they should be ok.

[vcruvinel]

First is oversharpened, but otherwise they should be ok.

Thanks for the feedback, Dana. I will edit again the Ryanair and upload the ATR from TAP.

Vinicius

[vcruvinel]

Hi!

Can I have prescreen in this shot? Unfortunately the weather was really poor this day but I get some light and now I trying to save some photos.



Any tips, improvements and advices will be really appreciate.

Best,

Vinicius

[dlowwa]

Hi!

Can I have prescreen in this shot? Unfortunately the weather was really poor this day but I get some light and now I trying to save some photos.

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Any tips, improvements and advices will be really appreciate.

Best,

Vinicius

Oversharpened and borderline contrast. White balance a touch warm, but probably acceptable.

[vcruvinel]

Oversharpened and borderline contrast. White balance a touch warm, but probably acceptable.

Thanks, Dana. I tried to correct the issues you listed. In the last photos I send to prescreen I constantly get the over sharpened feedback. just try know to find the right way again.



Thanks,

Vinicius

[dlowwa]

Thanks, Dana. I tried to correct the issues you listed. In the last photos I send to prescreen I constantly get the over sharpened feedback. just try know to find the right way again.

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Thanks,

Vinicius

Still a touch oversharpened for me, but may be acceptable.

[vcruvinel]

Hi!

Today I got this photo rejected: https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6476957

This one was a second try from this same photo (after trying to correct the issues from my first attempt), as my first attempt has been rejected by the same reasons included a screener comment: cyan cast (which I completely agree after saw again in other monitor).

Don't want to appeal, but just need to know if there is any way to improve this photo. I tried to correct the color issue and also increase the exposure in this second attempt.

Many thanks as aways.

Best Regards,

Vinicius Cruvinel