Stijn Bavré - Editing Advice

[crisquijano]

yes, better on the framing.

[Flipkaan]

Stijn,

IMHO you can increase the exposure +0,1. Also needs a little CW rotation.

Cheers,

Vinicius

Thanks,

Made some adjustments on the OO-SFW, and have some others to pre screen, thank!



Some more for pre screen:


(looks like some left that panel open, at the back door of the plane?)

[vcruvinel]

Thanks,

Made some adjustments on the OO-SFW, and have some others to pre screen, thank!

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16102[/ATTACH]

Some more for pre screen:

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16103[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16104[/ATTACH] (looks like some left that panel open, at the back door of the plane?)
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16105[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16106[/ATTACH]

Stijn,

About the last one, I think the exposure can be increased, also a bit more contrast, but is my personal opinion. I did a quick edit



Also it appears to have some compression. Did you edit and save into the same JPG? It may cause this issue.

About the others:

#1. dark
#2. bit soft in the windows (center of fuselage) but may be ok.
#3. dark
#4. dark

Cheers,

Vinicius

[Flipkaan]

Stijn,

About the last one, I think the exposure can be increased, also a bit more contrast, but is my personal opinion. I did a quick edit

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16107[/ATTACH]

Also it appears to have some compression. Did you edit and save into the same JPG? It may cause this issue.

About the others:

#1. dark
#2. bit soft in the windows (center of fuselage) but may be ok.
#3. dark
#4. dark

Cheers,

Vinicius

Editing in RAW and saved in JPG

[Flipkaan]

Stijn,

About the last one, I think the exposure can be increased, also a bit more contrast, but is my personal opinion. I did a quick edit

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16107[/ATTACH]

Also it appears to have some compression. Did you edit and save into the same JPG? It may cause this issue.

About the others:

#1. dark
#2. bit soft in the windows (center of fuselage) but may be ok.
#3. dark
#4. dark

Cheers,

Vinicius

I gave it another try:

[olandes269]

Hello,

I'm not screener but I'm like Vinicius and cristian.

I think you have cleared up too much

Look at your histogram. Before you had a dish on the right , now your right histogram is too pronounced and forms a dish on the left . 2 balance your histogram and it will be ok

See you soon

Olivier

[dlowwa]

Some more for pre screen:

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16103[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16104[/ATTACH] (looks like some left that panel open, at the back door of the plane?)
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16105[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16106[/ATTACH]

1. dark/contrast
2. ok
3. dark/contrast
4. dark

I gave it another try:


[ATTACH=CONFIG]16109[/ATTACH]

Contrast still a little flat.

[Flipkaan]

Hello guys, thanks for all previous feedback. Have some new photos for pre screen.

Thanks!

[777MAN]

Hello guys, thanks for all previous feedback. Have some new photos for pre screen.

Thanks!

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16934[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16935[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16936[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16937[/ATTACH]
[ATTACH=CONFIG]16938[/ATTACH]

Hi

1. Horizon, A few cmos dust spots
2. Heat Hazed
3. Dark/Contrast, Horizon
4. Dark/Contrast, Horizon
5. Horizon, Contrast (looks like a sunny day - I'd consider dropping the mids down a touch (around 0.93ish) and use the mids (grey) dropper in say PS levels on the grey top of the tower which balances the ambience. Your call).

Hope it helps T

[Flipkaan]

Hi

1. Horizon, A few cmos dust spots
2. Heat Hazed
3. Dark/Contrast, Horizon
4. Dark/Contrast, Horizon
5. Horizon, Contrast (looks like a sunny day - I'd consider dropping the mids down a touch (around 0.93ish) and use the mids (grey) dropper in say PS levels on the grey top of the tower which balances the ambience. Your call).

Hope it helps T

Thank you, i dit try something else instead of all the editing in Photoshop, did some editing in Lightroom. Can i have a pre screen on this one please?

[dlowwa]

Thank you, i dit try something else instead of all the editing in Photoshop, did some editing in Lightroom. Can i have a pre screen on this one please?

[ATTACH=CONFIG]16987[/ATTACH]

Soft, borderline contrast.

[Flipkaan]

Hello

Can i have a pre screen on this one please,

[dlowwa]

Hello

Can i have a pre screen on this one please,

[ATTACH=CONFIG]17064[/ATTACH]

Likely to be rejected for overprocessed.

[Flipkaan]

Likely to be rejected for overprocessed.

Thanks,

Is this better?

[dlowwa]

Thanks,

Is this better?

[ATTACH=CONFIG]17065[/ATTACH]

Halos are less visible on this one.