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  • Originally posted by Julian S. View Post
    Hey,
    No Problem, glad to hear that .



    #1 borderline backlit IMO as the tail is completely in shadow but otherwise OK (may another screener disagree, either positive or negative)
    #2 too high in frame
    #3 should be OK

    Have a good Night.
    Thanks a lot Julian,

    Xiamen is in the queue, the Cathay will remain personal as an earler attempt with something similar fell down the wrong way.

    Made a new edit of the Easyjet. thought I couldn't crop out the aircraft in the left underneath in mu first attempt, but Apparantly I could ( No cloning!!!)

    This is it.

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    And four more for check-up.

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    Thanks in Advance.

    Best Regards.

    Wilko

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    • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
      Thanks a lot Julian,

      Xiamen is in the queue, the Cathay will remain personal as an earler attempt with something similar fell down the wrong way.

      Made a new edit of the Easyjet. thought I couldn't crop out the aircraft in the left underneath in mu first attempt, but Apparantly I could ( No cloning!!!)

      This is it.

      [ATTACH=CONFIG]13949[/ATTACH]

      And four more for check-up.

      [ATTACH=CONFIG]13950[/ATTACH]
      [ATTACH=CONFIG]13951[/ATTACH]
      [ATTACH=CONFIG]13952[/ATTACH]
      [ATTACH=CONFIG]13953[/ATTACH]

      Thanks in Advance.

      Best Regards.

      Wilko
      1. borderline soft
      3-4 borderline contrast (too low)
      2 & 5 the sky seems darker towards the top of the frame. did you use a filter?

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      • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
        1. borderline soft
        3-4 borderline contrast (too low)
        2 & 5 the sky seems darker towards the top of the frame. did you use a filter?
        Thanks Dana.
        Yes, 2 and 5 were shot with a camera with filter. If it's a problem I won't upload them.

        3 an 4 again with increased contrast. (adding contrast to the Orange Pride was difficult, gave it a try , think it's under exposed now).

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        Three other ones also.

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        Will include the Easyjet with additional layer of sharpness.

        Thanks in advance.

        Wilko

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        • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
          Thanks Dana.
          Yes, 2 and 5 were shot with a camera with filter. If it's a problem I won't upload them.
          If it was a physical filter (i.e. polarizer) then leave a note with the uploads. We allow physical filters, but not digital ones to recreate that darkened sky look.

          Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
          3 an 4 again with increased contrast. (adding contrast to the Orange Pride was difficult, gave it a try , think it's under exposed now).

          [ATTACH=CONFIG]13966[/ATTACH]
          [ATTACH=CONFIG]13967[/ATTACH]

          Three other ones also.

          [ATTACH=CONFIG]13968[/ATTACH]
          [ATTACH=CONFIG]13969[/ATTACH]
          [ATTACH=CONFIG]13970[/ATTACH]

          Will include the Easyjet with additional layer of sharpness.

          Thanks in advance.

          Wilko
          1-2 borderline for color (cyan/blue cast) and contrast
          3-4 also slightly blue & dark/flat, but only need minor adjustments
          5 should be ok

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          • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
            If it was a physical filter (i.e. polarizer) then leave a note with the uploads. We allow physical filters, but not digital ones to recreate that darkened sky look.

            OK, don't even know how to use filters in Lightroom. Will do my best to keep an eye on it. Don't think I will upload the BA as I had to correct the exposure/highlights heavily and it could turn into overprocessed.

            1-2 borderline for color (cyan/blue cast) and contrast
            3-4 also slightly blue & dark/flat, but only need minor adjustments
            5 should be ok
            Thanks Dana.

            1-4 giving me a whole lot of trouble. Especially removing blue cast and right contrast.
            Made new edits, but I think the're even worse.
            Will show three.

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            And two others.

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            Thanks in advance.

            Best regards,

            Wilko

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            • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
              Thanks Dana.

              1-4 giving me a whole lot of trouble. Especially removing blue cast and right contrast.
              Made new edits, but I think the're even worse.
              Will show three.

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              [ATTACH=CONFIG]14016[/ATTACH]
              [ATTACH=CONFIG]14017[/ATTACH]

              And two others.

              [ATTACH=CONFIG]14018[/ATTACH]
              [ATTACH=CONFIG]14019[/ATTACH]

              Thanks in advance.

              Best regards,

              Wilko
              1. borderline soft/contrast
              2-3 borderline dark
              4. borderline soft/contrast
              5. ok

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              • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                1. borderline soft/contrast
                2-3 borderline dark
                4. borderline soft/contrast
                5. ok
                Thanks a lot Dana,

                Added exposure to the AA and the Norwegian.
                Do I have to use special scheme to the Norwegian as there are also titles on the Fuseelage,
                Three new ones for advice.

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                Thanks in advance.

                Best Regards.

                Wilko

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                • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                  Thanks a lot Dana,

                  Added exposure to the AA and the Norwegian.
                  Do I have to use special scheme to the Norwegian as there are also titles on the Fuseelage,
                  Three new ones for advice.

                  [ATTACH=CONFIG]14072[/ATTACH]
                  [ATTACH=CONFIG]14073[/ATTACH]
                  [ATTACH=CONFIG]14074[/ATTACH]

                  Thanks in advance.

                  Best Regards.

                  Wilko
                  First two are too high in the frame.

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                  • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                    First two are too high in the frame.
                    Thanks a lot Dana.

                    The Garuda and a re-edit of the Atlas are in the queue.

                    More for advice.

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                    Apparently heathaze. I want to know if it's at least Borderline.

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                    All difficult light conditions. Etihad Cargo might be too soft as well.

                    And maybe other issues,

                    Thanks in Advance.

                    Best Regards.

                    Wilko

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                    • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                      Thanks a lot Dana.

                      The Garuda and a re-edit of the Atlas are in the queue.

                      More for advice.

                      [ATTACH=CONFIG]14132[/ATTACH]
                      [ATTACH=CONFIG]14136[/ATTACH]

                      Apparently heathaze. I want to know if it's at least Borderline.

                      [ATTACH=CONFIG]14133[/ATTACH]
                      [ATTACH=CONFIG]14134[/ATTACH]
                      [ATTACH=CONFIG]14135[/ATTACH]

                      All difficult light conditions. Etihad Cargo might be too soft as well.

                      And maybe other issues,

                      Thanks in Advance.

                      Best Regards.

                      Wilko
                      1-2 ok
                      3. borderline contrast
                      4. ok
                      5. soft (tail, borderline contrast)

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                      • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                        More for advice.

                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]14132[/ATTACH]
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]14136[/ATTACH]

                        Apparently heathaze. I want to know if it's at least Borderline.

                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]14133[/ATTACH]
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]14134[/ATTACH]
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]14135[/ATTACH]

                        All difficult light conditions. Etihad Cargo might be too soft as well.

                        And maybe other issues,

                        Thanks in Advance.

                        Best Regards.

                        Wilko
                        no. 1 looks a bit noisy, no 2 is rather dark imo, tad noisy and unleveled, no.3 looks somewhat noisy, no. 4 looks acceptable, no. 5 soft and rather harsh contrast (darks too dark, highlight overexposed)

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                        • Originally posted by pdeboer View Post
                          no. 1 looks a bit noisy, no 2 is rather dark imo, tad noisy and unleveled, no.3 looks somewhat noisy, no. 4 looks acceptable, no. 5 soft and rather harsh contrast (darks too dark, highlight overexposed)
                          Dana and Pamela, thank you both.
                          A little distracting with different opinions.
                          Conclude of all is that at least 5 shall remain personal. 1 and 4 are in the queue.

                          Question about this reject..https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413636
                          Found the garbage myself (different things)
                          About the colour. Is this wat you call cyan cast? Or is it different. Only for learning for myself and to act accordingly.

                          Thanks in Advance.

                          Best regards,

                          Wilko

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                          • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post

                            Question about this reject..https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413636
                            Found the garbage myself (different things)
                            About the colour. Is this wat you call cyan cast? Or is it different. Only for learning for myself and to act accordingly.

                            Thanks in Advance.

                            Best regards,

                            Wilko
                            Looks a little green to me.

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                            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                              Looks a little green to me.
                              OK. Dana.

                              Regarding this reject. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413636
                              Tried to remove the cast... Removing the garbage was a little difficult due to the dust in a corner.. Gave it a try.

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                              Regarding this reject...https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6417417
                              Made a new edit. Gave it CCW.
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                              And three others...

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ID:	1022812 Tail softnes again IMO. Is it fixable?

                              Thanks in advance.

                              Best regards,

                              Wilko

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                              • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                                OK. Dana.

                                Regarding this reject. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6413636
                                Tried to remove the cast... Removing the garbage was a little difficult due to the dust in a corner.. Gave it a try.

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]14287[/ATTACH]

                                Regarding this reject...https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=6417417
                                Made a new edit. Gave it CCW.
                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]14288[/ATTACH]

                                And three others...

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]14289[/ATTACH]
                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]14290[/ATTACH]
                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]14291[/ATTACH] Tail softnes again IMO. Is it fixable?

                                Thanks in advance.

                                Best regards,

                                Wilko
                                1. tail slightly soft, but otherwise ok
                                2-4 ok for me
                                5. borderline soft, but passable for me

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