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  • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
    Thanks a lot Gerardo,

    Pulled the Belavia 737 a little down. Is it better now?
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]21631[/ATTACH]

    And four others for advice.

    [ATTACH=CONFIG]21632[/ATTACH]. Thinking it has too flat contrast.
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]21633[/ATTACH] Crop too tight? Entire aircraft was not included in the RAW-file. It's not that much different.
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]21634[/ATTACH] sharpness and contrast
    [ATTACH=CONFIG]21635[/ATTACH] horizon especially, seems off to me, but I'm unsure.

    Thank you in advance.

    Best regards,

    Wilko
    1: OK-ish, I personally would add a tad more sharpening and place it a little lower
    2: OK
    3: OK-ish, if you can add a bit space above the tail, better. Looks also borderline soft
    4: OK
    5: a tad dark, even if I would accept it
    My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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    • Originally posted by LX-A343 View Post
      1: OK-ish, I personally would add a tad more sharpening and place it a little lower
      2: OK
      3: OK-ish, if you can add a bit space above the tail, better. Looks also borderline soft
      4: OK
      5: a tad dark, even if I would accept it
      Thanks a lot Gerardo,

      Will see wat to do with the Belavia. have to study it properly at the moment.
      Took another one from the Delta A330 to edit , as I couldn't create more space above the tail.
      Also on this one no entire aircraft included.

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      Four new ones for advice from a very windy day here yesterday.

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      Thank You in advance.

      Best Regards,

      Wilko

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      • Hi,
        The Delta 330 would work for me with the crop above.
        Norwegian 787 is a tad soft but not much
        747, charnels ok but borderline contrast
        KLM, should be ok and not similar (ground vs no ground)
        Turkish, borderline contrast (white plane and light sky)

        Hope it helps

        Alex

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        • Originally posted by Alex - Spot-This ! View Post
          Hi,
          The Delta 330 would work for me with the crop above.
          Norwegian 787 is a tad soft but not much
          747, charnels ok but borderline contrast
          KLM, should be ok and not similar (ground vs no ground)
          Turkish, borderline contrast (white plane and light sky)

          Hope it helps

          Alex
          Thanks a lot Alex, that helps indeed.

          Will try the A330 and the KLM.
          I remain with two questions.
          What do you mean with the charnels on the ABC 747?, can't really figure out tbh.

          2nd question is about the Norwegian 787. I reworked it a little and added sharpness on ( to me) soft places. Coming to this.
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          And three more for pre-screen/ advice , due to challenging conditions last saturday

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          Thank you in advance.

          Best Regards,

          Wilko

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          • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
            Thanks a lot Alex, that helps indeed.

            Will try the A330 and the KLM.
            I remain with two questions.
            What do you mean with the charnels on the ABC 747?, can't really figure out tbh.

            2nd question is about the Norwegian 787. I reworked it a little and added sharpness on ( to me) soft places. Coming to this.
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]21705[/ATTACH]

            And three more for pre-screen/ advice , due to challenging conditions last saturday

            [ATTACH=CONFIG]21706[/ATTACH] Especially contrast and color.
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]21707[/ATTACH] afraid for contrast/backlit.
            [ATTACH=CONFIG]21708[/ATTACH] contrast especially .

            Thank you in advance.

            Best Regards,

            Wilko
            1. ok
            2. borderline dark/oversharpened
            3-4 ok

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            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
              1. ok
              2. borderline dark/oversharpened
              3-4 ok
              Thanks a lot Dana.
              1,3 and 4 are in the queue.

              Five new ones for pre-screen/advice.

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              And four from a trip to Cologne last weekend.

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              Thank you in advance

              Best Regards,

              Wilko

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              • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                Thanks a lot Dana.
                1,3 and 4 are in the queue.

                Five new ones for pre-screen/advice.

                [ATTACH=CONFIG]21931[/ATTACH] re-edit of this reject. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7115393

                And four from a trip to Cologne last weekend.

                [ATTACH=CONFIG]21932[/ATTACH]
                [ATTACH=CONFIG]21933[/ATTACH]
                [ATTACH=CONFIG]21934[/ATTACH] afraid for backlit on this one.
                [ATTACH=CONFIG]21935[/ATTACH]

                Thank you in advance

                Best Regards,

                Wilko
                1. borderline contrast
                2-5 borderline soft; 4 almost backlit

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                • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                  1. borderline contrast
                  2-5 borderline soft; 4 almost backlit
                  OK, Thanks Dana,

                  Reworked versions (other snaps, but same aircraft) on TK en SU. of 2,3, and 5.

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                  And two others.

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                  afraid for sharpness on all of them.

                  Thnx in Advance.

                  Best Regards,

                  Wilko

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                  • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                    OK, Thanks Dana,

                    Reworked versions (other snaps, but same aircraft) on TK en SU. of 2,3, and 5.

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                    [ATTACH=CONFIG]22060[/ATTACH]
                    [ATTACH=CONFIG]22061[/ATTACH]

                    And two others.

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                    [ATTACH=CONFIG]22063[/ATTACH]

                    afraid for sharpness on all of them.

                    Thnx in Advance.

                    Best Regards,

                    Wilko
                    Horizon on the last two maybe borderline (CCW/CW respectively), but otherwise they look ok.

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                    • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                      Horizon on the last two maybe borderline (CCW/CW respectively), but otherwise they look ok.
                      Thanks a lot Dana.

                      Will try at least the first Three.

                      Could you (or someone else ofcourse pre-screen these images?

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ID:	1033261 Now it tuns more like an airport overview, but too me it doesn't work. If the first one is good enough/fixable ,you can ignore this one.

                      And

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                      Thanks in advance.

                      Best Regards,

                      Wilko.

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                      • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                        Thanks a lot Dana.

                        Will try at least the first Three.

                        Could you (or someone else ofcourse pre-screen these images?

                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]22192[/ATTACH] I want to upload it with the info of the UPS Boeing 757F, but not sure if this crop works and if the FedeX is too distracting .In that case I have another edit.
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]22193[/ATTACH] Now it tuns more like an airport overview, but too me it doesn't work. If the first one is good enough/fixable ,you can ignore this one.

                        And

                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]22194[/ATTACH] other snap as earlier in this thread, but still unsure about backlit/contrast/ sharpness.
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]22195[/ATTACH] especially horizon.
                        [ATTACH=CONFIG]22196[/ATTACH]

                        Thanks in advance.

                        Best Regards,

                        Wilko.
                        1-2 Probably go with the second of the two due to the crop at the top rather than the bottom, but both kind of borderline.
                        3 & 5 ok
                        4 might need a little CCW rotation

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                        • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                          1-2 Probably go with the second of the two due to the crop at the top rather than the bottom, but both kind of borderline.
                          3 & 5 ok
                          4 might need a little CCW rotation
                          Thanks a lot Dana.

                          Got the German Air Force A321 rejected yesterday. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7160479

                          Dust spots were pretty clear indeed, little too much soft spots indeed, but totally don't understand the contrast point tbh.

                          Made a re-edit with a tiny different crop, to pull out the spot on top of the building.
                          Very curious what you think about it.

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                          Also tried a different kind of an airport overview as I wasn't convinced about the previous two.
                          Can't use the Egypt A330 as I got that one already accepted.
                          thoughts would be appreciated on this one.

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                          And two others for pre-screen.

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                          Thank iyou in advance.

                          Best Regards,

                          Wilko

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                          • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                            Thanks a lot Dana.

                            Got the German Air Force A321 rejected yesterday. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7160479

                            Dust spots were pretty clear indeed, little too much soft spots indeed, but totally don't understand the contrast point tbh.

                            Made a re-edit with a tiny different crop, to pull out the spot on top of the building.
                            Very curious what you think about it.

                            [ATTACH=CONFIG]22572[/ATTACH]

                            Also tried a different kind of an airport overview as I wasn't convinced about the previous two.
                            Can't use the Egypt A330 as I got that one already accepted.
                            thoughts would be appreciated on this one.

                            [ATTACH=CONFIG]22573[/ATTACH]

                            And two others for pre-screen.

                            [ATTACH=CONFIG]22574[/ATTACH] exposure and contrast
                            [ATTACH=CONFIG]22575[/ATTACH] low light shot with different settings as I use normally.

                            Thank iyou in advance.

                            Best Regards,

                            Wilko
                            1. borderline overexposed
                            2. does not qualify as airport overview
                            3. ok
                            4. borderline color (red)

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                            • Originally posted by dlowwa View Post
                              1. borderline overexposed
                              2. does not qualify as airport overview
                              3. ok
                              4. borderline color (red)
                              Thanks a lot Dana.
                              I would appreciate advice on these three.

                              Reworked #4 from the previous post but still not sure about it.

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                              Tried to solve the issues from this reject. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7174385, but still unsure about color and also about sharpness on this one.

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                              And another one with contrast issues I think so. (long focal length and pretty heavy crop)

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                              Thanks in advance.

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                              • Originally posted by wkd001 View Post
                                Thanks a lot Dana.
                                I would appreciate advice on these three.

                                Reworked #4 from the previous post but still not sure about it.

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]22747[/ATTACH]

                                Tried to solve the issues from this reject. https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7174385, but still unsure about color and also about sharpness on this one.

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]22748[/ATTACH]

                                And another one with contrast issues I think so. (long focal length and pretty heavy crop)

                                [ATTACH=CONFIG]22749[/ATTACH]

                                Thanks in advance.
                                1-2 ok
                                3 borderline dark/contrast

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