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  • #16
    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
    After modification, I added some contrast, it is enough or more?

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    Thank!

    Olivier
    Still needs some contrast. Darken the shadows will help

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    • #17
      Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
      oups, I made a mistake, it is the one there!!!!!

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      Saddened, the message of front has twice the modified even photo

      Olivier
      This one shows lack of contrast as well

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      • #18
        Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
        Hello JP team,

        New picture for advice

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        Thank you
        1-Bit blurry, soft
        2-Perfect
        3-Perfect, remember to select special scheme category
        4-I´d say it would be better to remove the planes in the foreground, small correction.
        5-Fine

        Be sure as always for dust spots

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        • #19
          Meneses, many thanks for your reply.

          For 4, That want to tell you there because the ilyushin 76 is alone!!! That have to I improve, Because the ilyushin 76 is rare on LFPG!!!.

          For 5, That you mean by "Fine"

          Thank you

          Olivier

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          • #20
            Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
            Meneses, many thanks for your reply.

            For 4, That want to tell you there because the ilyushin 76 is alone!!! That have to I improve, Because the ilyushin 76 is rare on LFPG!!!.

            For 5, That you mean by "Fine"

            Thank you

            Olivier
            4 is fine, but perhaps the 5 white spots (planes or birds) can be easily taken away
            5 means that should be accepted with no complains

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            • #21
              Ok thank, yes it's the birds with ilyushin.

              new pictures,

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              Thank you Meneses, good night!!!! here at Paris it's 10 PM o'clock!!!!

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              • #22
                Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                Ok thank, yes it's the birds with ilyushin.

                new pictures,

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                Thank you Meneses, good night!!!! here at Paris it's 10 PM o'clock!!!!
                Great contrast in there. Germanwings and Lufthansa´s pics are overexposed. And they all show some dust spots.

                Cheers!

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                • #23
                  Hello Meneses,

                  Indeed, Sunday was a magical day to make beautiful shots

                  I removed from the exhibition. Is it better? do I remove more exposure

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                  and these; it's good?

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                  I will remove all the dust spots by checking the site JP because your tool is better than mine.

                  Good evening and thank you

                  Olivier

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                  • #24
                    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                    Hello Meneses,

                    Indeed, Sunday was a magical day to make beautiful shots

                    I removed from the exhibition. Is it better? do I remove more exposure

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                    and these; it's good?

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                    I will remove all the dust spots by checking the site JP because your tool is better than mine.

                    Good evening and thank you

                    Olivier
                    1-3 other than dust spots, quality is ok.
                    4. contrast too low
                    5. soft

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                    • #25
                      thank you, I added contrast, is it better?

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                      Good day JP crew

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                      • #26
                        Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                        thank you, I added contrast, is it better?

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                        and another pictures,

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                        Good day JP crew
                        0. ok
                        1. soft
                        2. borderline soft
                        3. ok
                        4. soft

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                        • #27
                          Hello,

                          Correction on the Norwegian and Aer Lingus

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                          and these please,

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                          I will rework the dust spots to go online.

                          Thank you very much.

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                          • #28
                            1) ok
                            2-3-4-5 need more sharpening

                            Regards
                            Alex

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                            • #29
                              I modified by adding sharpening, is it better? Thanks to the JP team for your availability

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                              and these,

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                              Good day

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                              • #30
                                Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                                I modified by adding sharpening, is it better? Thanks to the JP team for your availability

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                                and these,

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                                Good day
                                Quality looks good on all of those.

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