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  • #31
    Hello JP Team,

    another pictures for improvement if necessary.

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    I will remove dust spots when going online.

    thanks in advance

    Olivier

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    • #32
      sniffff, I was forgotten !!!!!!!! see you soon

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      • #33
        Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
        Hello JP Team,

        another pictures for improvement if necessary.

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        I will remove dust spots when going online.

        thanks in advance

        Olivier
        I'd vote add on all of them.

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        • #34
          Thank you B7772ADL,

          Another picture, I know that the plane is to move away from the center but I cannot do better. What a pity! Now that also allows to have the more visible rainbow.

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          see you soon

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          • #35
            Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
            Thank you B7772ADL,

            Another picture, I know that the plane is to move away from the center but I cannot do better. What a pity! Now that also allows to have the more visible rainbow.

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            see you soon
            You could crop it a bit wider than this if you wanted, or even a 4x3 crop to show more of the sky/rainbow.

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            • #36
              Hello,

              Refocused 16/9

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              and these for corrrection

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              Thank you and good day

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              • #37
                Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                Hello,

                Refocused 16/9

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                and these for corrrection

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                Thank you and good day
                They all look acceptable to me

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                • #38
                  Thank you for your answer.

                  Anothers pictures

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                  See you soon

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                  • #39
                    Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                    Thank you for your answer.

                    Anothers pictures

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                    See you soon
                    1. ok
                    2. cut off
                    3. obstructed
                    4. blurry, contrast, oversharpened
                    5. ok

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                    • #40
                      Hello JP crew, for correction please,

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                      Thank you

                      Olivier

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                      • #41
                        Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                        Hello JP crew, for correction please,

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                        Thank you

                        Olivier
                        All except #4 were taken in poor light and stand to be rejected for contrast.

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                        • #42
                          Once again one thousand thank you

                          New picture for correction please,

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                          Good day

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                          • #43
                            Hi,
                            Unfortunately they all suffer from being backlit. First 3 also have a poor contrast due to planes not being lit enough.

                            Regards
                            Alex

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                            • #44
                              Thank you I shall keep them for my personal collection.

                              And these please,

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                              See you soon

                              Olivier

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                              • #45
                                Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                                Thank you I shall keep them for my personal collection.

                                And these please,

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                                See you soon

                                Olivier
                                1 and 3: borderline soft
                                all others: look OK here.
                                My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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