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  • #61
    Hello JP Crew,

    My Finnair is accepted!!!

    but these have been rejected.

    After modification, is good or not please,

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    Thank you

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    • #62
      Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
      Hello JP Crew,

      My Finnair is accepted!!!

      but these have been rejected.

      After modification, is good or not please,

      1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11569[/ATTACH]

      2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11570[/ATTACH]

      3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11571[/ATTACH]

      Thank you
      Except for the dust spots, they should be ok.

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      • #63
        Thank you Dana.

        anothers pictures for corrections.

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        See you soon

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        • #64
          Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
          Thank you Dana.

          anothers pictures for corrections.

          1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11578[/ATTACH]

          2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11579[/ATTACH]

          3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11580[/ATTACH]

          4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11581[/ATTACH]

          5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11582[/ATTACH]

          See you soon
          1. borderline contrast
          2. contrast
          3. contrast
          4. contrast, color, soft
          5. contrast

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          • #65
            Hello JP Crew,

            New pictures for correction, please.

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            See you soon Olivier

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            • #66
              Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
              Hello JP Crew,

              New pictures for correction, please.

              1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11713[/ATTACH]

              2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11714[/ATTACH]

              3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11715[/ATTACH]

              4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11716[/ATTACH]

              See you soon Olivier
              1. ok
              2. borderline soft
              3. soft, contrast/exposure
              4. borderline cut off

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              • #67
                Thank you Dana,

                it's better?

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                • #68
                  Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                  Thank you Dana,

                  it's better?

                  1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11719[/ATTACH]

                  2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11720[/ATTACH]
                  Both look soft to me. Mainly #1 looks like the original is slightly blurry.
                  My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                  • #69
                    ok, thank you, I keep them for my personal collection because I am at the most of the retouch.

                    and these please.

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                    • #70
                      Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                      ok, thank you, I keep them for my personal collection because I am at the most of the retouch.

                      and these please.

                      1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11721[/ATTACH]

                      2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11722[/ATTACH]

                      3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11723[/ATTACH]

                      4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11724[/ATTACH]

                      5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11725[/ATTACH]
                      no. 5 is overexposed, no.4 is borderline overexposed, 1-3 are rather bright but seem acceptable

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                      • #71
                        I have modified.

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                        • #72
                          Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                          I have modified.

                          1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11726[/ATTACH]

                          2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11727[/ATTACH]

                          3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11728[/ATTACH]

                          4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11729[/ATTACH]

                          5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11730[/ATTACH]
                          1. obstruction
                          2. soft
                          3-5 ok

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                          • #73
                            thank you Dana,

                            i changed

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                            See you soon, good day

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                            • #74
                              Originally posted by olandes269 View Post
                              thank you Dana,

                              i changed

                              1 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11749[/ATTACH]

                              2 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11750[/ATTACH]

                              3 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11751[/ATTACH]

                              4 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11752[/ATTACH]

                              5 [ATTACH=CONFIG]11753[/ATTACH]

                              See you soon, good day
                              1: soft, mainly due to the lack of contrast on the aircraft itself
                              2-5: OK
                              My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                              • #75
                                Thank You LX,

                                and these please,

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