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    Hello JP Crew, Happy Christmas,

    I have a doubt about it.

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    a question, is it desirable to crop in 16/9 or stay in 4/3?

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew, Happy Christmas,

    I have a doubt about it.

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    a question, is it desirable to crop in 16/9 or stay in 4/3?

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    1) light is way too bad resulting in poor contrast
    2) maybe a tad soft
    3) nice angle but too strong contrast, would recommend to bring the exposure down a bit

    Regards and Joyeux NoŽl !

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    Thank you Alex,

    I have proced of modification

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    Olivier

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Thank you Alex,

    I have proced of modification

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    Olivier
    1. borderline contrast
    2. ok
    3. ok
    4. borderline heat haze

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    Thankyou for yoyur answer and merry christmas.

    Olivier

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    Hello JP crew, I have a doubt but I think it must be good !!!!!!

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    Thank you and good New Year's eve

    Olivier

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP crew, I have a doubt but I think it must be good !!!!!!

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    Thank you and good New Year's eve

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    1. Overexposed
    2. Looks ok
    3. Overexposed
    4. Soft in places
    5. Bad contrast/colour - the reds appear orange and overall a yellow tint.

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    I just made the changes. I did a white balance for the aeroflot (5) but initially it was a yellow light of a low winter sun

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    and thank you for the speed answer.

    Olivier

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    I just made the changes. I did a white balance for the aeroflot (5) but initially it was a yellow light of a low winter sun

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    and thank you for the speed answer.

    Olivier
    I think you over-corrected the Aeroflot, but otherwise don't see any major issues.

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    Thank you Dana, Alex, B772ADL and JP Crew, HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!!!!

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    Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

    Please for correction

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

    Please for correction

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    These would be similar, so please choose just one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Hello JP Crew, Happy New Year 2018,

    Please for correction

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    both lack contrast.

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    Thank you Alex for your answer.

    Finally we had a little sun on Roissy !!!
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    how can i improve this one or is it passable

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    Quote Originally Posted by olandes269 View Post
    Thank you Alex for your answer.

    Finally we had a little sun on Roissy !!!
    Some photos for correction

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    how can i improve this one or is it passable

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    Borderline oversharpened on 1 & 4, but otherwise ok.

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    Thank you Dana

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    Hello, I have a doubt on two points, the first is on the obstruction of the wheels and the second on the tail of the plane, see if it is not too fair

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    hi,
    the obstruction is borderline but should be just ok. The crop on the tail is too tight for me but some other screeners might think it's acceptable

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    Thank you Alex

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    For correction please

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    see you soon
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