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    Can I get these two pre-screened please?
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    Ideally I'd like to upload the second shot. Leveling was a bit difficult. There are very few large, vertical features. I mainly used the casino features to the left of the tallest tower. Thank you

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    2nd pic looks fine - Maybe I would suggest to add a tad of luminosity and saturation. Horizon looks ok to me

    Regards
    Alex

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    • #3
      Can I get these pre-screened please
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      Its a new location for me; I'm mainly unsure about the colors on the Condor shot because I never take sunset/rise photos.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by WilliamN View Post
        Can I get these pre-screened please
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        Its a new location for me; I'm mainly unsure about the colors on the Condor shot because I never take sunset/rise photos.
        they all look a tad dark to me, otherwise they look OK

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        • #5
          Can I get advice in these two please
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          Thanks

          And is this/these kind of cropped shots acceptable?
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          • #6
            Originally posted by WilliamN View Post
            Can I get advice in these two please
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            Thanks

            And is this/these kind of cropped shots acceptable?
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            1. Soft
            2. Looks ok but borderline soft.
            3. Crop yes, but it's soft.

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            • #7
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              Is this shot/this kind of lighting acceptable? Thanks!
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              • #8
                Originally posted by WilliamN View Post
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                Is this shot/this kind of lighting acceptable? Thanks!
                Borderline for contrast, but might be worth a try.

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                • #9
                  I made a small edit. How is this?
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                  And I was unsure about these. I caught a little of the fence wire at the bottom of the Alaska but it isn't going over the plane.
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                  • #10
                    Originally posted by WilliamN View Post
                    I made a small edit. How is this?
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                    And I was unsure about these. I caught a little of the fence wire at the bottom of the Alaska but it isn't going over the plane.
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                    1. still borderline
                    2. dirty
                    3. soft, vignetting
                    4. soft
                    5. soft

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                    • #11
                      Can I get these pre-screened please? Thanks!
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                      • #12
                        Originally posted by WilliamN View Post
                        Can I get these pre-screened please? Thanks!
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                        In my opinion they need smaller fixes:
                        1: slightly overexposed and leaning to the right
                        2: OK, maybe a tad soft
                        3: again maybe a tad soft and check for clipped highlights with the histogram

                        As mentioned: easy fixes.
                        My photos on Flickr www.flickr.com/photos/geridominguez

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                        • #13
                          Thank you! I lowered the exposure on the Antonov and rotated the horizon to the left. I had other shots that were edited similarly. I readjusted the exposure on them based on your feedback.
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                          • #14
                            1. is a tad soft, 2&3 look acceptable

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                              Is this shot acceptable? Thanks!
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