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  • #46
    Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
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    (VE, not VD)
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    Stupid fence - you had a better position

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    • #47
      Definitely yes :/

      Thanks a lot Dana for your help. What about these two?

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      Thanks a lot in advance!

      //Henrik

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      • #48
        Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
        Definitely yes :/

        Thanks a lot Dana for your help. What about these two?

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        Thanks a lot in advance!

        //Henrik
        Both a bit dark/contrasty and editing halos visible, especially on the second.

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        • #49
          Good evening,

          I've got a few pictures that I'm unsure about - any advice is appreciated

          Many thanks in advance!

          //Henrik
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          • #50
            Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
            Good evening,

            I've got a few pictures that I'm unsure about - any advice is appreciated

            Many thanks in advance!

            //Henrik
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            1-2 vignetting
            3. contrast. not fixable.
            4. horizon, borderline vignetting
            5. soft, vignetting

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            • #51
              Hi Dana,
              thanks a lot for your help!

              What can I do about the vignetting? Is it somehow fixable?

              Do these pictures look better or do they have similar problems? Thanks for any advice.

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              //Henrik

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              • #52
                Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                What can I do about the vignetting? Is it somehow fixable?
                Easy: don't shoot with the aperture wide open. The wider the aperture, the more likely you are to see vignetting issues. These are all in the f/5-5.6 range, which I assume is near wide-open for your lens. The newer batch is indeed better, almost certainly because they were instead shot in the f/7.1-8.0 range. A couple of them have strange edit in the upper left and/or a yellow-green tint (second also dark), but otherwise should be acceptable.

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                • #53
                  Thank you very much Dana, glad that the vignetting didn't affect the other pictures

                  I'm unsure about this A380, is it acceptable?
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                  • #54
                    Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                    Thank you very much Dana, glad that the vignetting didn't affect the other pictures

                    I'm unsure about this A380, is it acceptable?
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                    Unsure on the horizon (might need a touch of CW), but otherwise should be ok.

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                    • #55
                      Hi Dana,
                      thanks for your help! I've tried to improve the picture, does it look good now? And what about the other two?

                      Thank you very much in advance
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                      • #56
                        Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                        Hi Dana,
                        thanks for your help! I've tried to improve the picture, does it look good now? And what about the other two?

                        Thank you very much in advance
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                        1. borderline overexposed
                        2. contrast, soft
                        3. obstruction, overprocessed, dirty

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                        • #57
                          Hi Dana thanks for your help with the pictures, I reckon the second two may not be fixable then..

                          I've had two rejections yesterday and would like to improve them.

                          1st https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7526443
                          I guess some cw rotation and a bit more contrast should do, what do you think?

                          2nd https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7526476
                          really unsure about this one, I had a good remark by the screener saying "way too much dead space above the wing. For such a photo, you better try something different, for example the classic rule of thirds." yet I'm not quite sure what do to with it. If I'm cropping it differently the wing will not be centered but I certainly wouldn't have the "dead space" problem. I've seen quite a few wing view photos recently that are actually not having the plane part centered but rather focussing on an interesting background (which in my view makes the photo better indeed) but can I do that?

                          Any advice is welcome, thank you very much in advance

                          //Henrik

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                          • #58
                            Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                            Hi Dana thanks for your help with the pictures, I reckon the second two may not be fixable then..

                            I've had two rejections yesterday and would like to improve them.

                            1st https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7526443
                            I guess some cw rotation and a bit more contrast should do, what do you think?

                            2nd https://www.jetphotos.com/viewqueued_b.php?id=7526476
                            really unsure about this one, I had a good remark by the screener saying "way too much dead space above the wing. For such a photo, you better try something different, for example the classic rule of thirds." yet I'm not quite sure what do to with it. If I'm cropping it differently the wing will not be centered but I certainly wouldn't have the "dead space" problem. I've seen quite a few wing view photos recently that are actually not having the plane part centered but rather focussing on an interesting background (which in my view makes the photo better indeed) but can I do that?

                            Any advice is welcome, thank you very much in advance

                            //Henrik
                            1. contrast looks ok to me, but yes, a little brightening and CW rotation should improve it some.
                            2. a subjective opinion, but I would also agree with that screener; too much empty space above for a portrait orientation. Better to use landscape, or at least center it differently.

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                            • #59
                              Hi Dana, thanks for your help. Did I understood you right, that the 319 window picture could also have been accepted but the screener just didn't like the way it was cropped?
                              I've tried to improve both pictures and have cropped the A319 differently. Hope you think they're better now.

                              Have got three other pictures as well that I'm unsure about. Thank you very much in advance and have a nice day/evening
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                              • #60
                                Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                                Hi Dana, thanks for your help. Did I understood you right, that the 319 window picture could also have been accepted but the screener just didn't like the way it was cropped?
                                Correct, but I agree with that decision, and I'd bet most other screeners would as well.

                                Originally posted by FRA/ARNspotter View Post
                                I've tried to improve both pictures and have cropped the A319 differently. Hope you think they're better now.

                                Have got three other pictures as well that I'm unsure about. Thank you very much in advance and have a nice day/evening
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                                1-2 ok for me
                                3. borderline centering/crop
                                4. borderline contrast
                                5. borderline glare/overexposed

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